kaun raha hai

muslima_1 · February 2, 2006, 10:00pm

kaun raha hai jawani main
aag se buj kar paani mein
mera ik wo hawala hai
shamil hai jo kahaani mein
dansta bhi ishk huwe
hum se kuch nadaani mein
ese un se rishta hai
jese lafz o mani mein
ishk ka kya samaan keren
dil ki be samaani mein
umar ka kya rona roe
guzri nafarmaani mein
*bapta hai raftaar mukhtar apni
keh jo raha hoon rawaani mein

*name of poet

hope u guys like it

darwesh · February 3, 2006, 2:29am

Re: kaun raha hai

Mohtarema....Muslima, thanks for sharing !

" Bhai Mukhtar ne Khoob kaha...hanste rote jawaani main "

muslima_1 · February 3, 2006, 11:33am

Re: kaun raha hai

thanks Darwesh

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 3, 2006, 8:39pm

Re: kaun raha hai

Nice.. :k:

gujmon · February 9, 2006, 6:00am

Re: kaun raha hai

Woah woah Muslima excellent

shim_thebest · February 9, 2006, 3:49pm

Re: kaun raha hai

as alwwaz FAB...very nice

Lovely_Me · February 9, 2006, 4:37pm

Re: kaun raha hai

very nice thanks 4 sharing:)

muslima_1 · February 9, 2006, 7:59pm

Re: kaun raha hai

thanks guys

IS · February 9, 2006, 8:16pm

Re: kaun raha hai

Very Nice

muslima_1 · February 9, 2006, 8:19pm

Re: kaun raha hai

^thank you

IS · February 9, 2006, 8:23pm

Re: kaun raha hai

^ welcome :)