kaun kehta hai

Jaan_Lewaa · April 6, 2004, 2:30am

kaun kehta hai
tum mere saath nahi ho
tum tou
meri ankhoon mai ho
meri baatoon mai ho
meri saansoon mai ho
mere dil mai ho
mere dil ki dharkan mai ho
mere khawaboon mai ho
mere khyaloon mai ho

Jaan_Lewaa · April 6, 2004, 2:38am

adhoori hai kan't make more to finish it

Azad · April 6, 2004, 6:18am

joot ke paon jo nahi hotay

chand_chehra · April 7, 2004, 12:40am

meri roh main ho
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meray laho/khoon ki rawani main ho :D

Rukhsarbibi · April 7, 2004, 10:22pm

meri jooti ki nok mein ho
mere thappar ke saaz mein ho :D

Jaan_Lewaa · April 8, 2004, 1:21am

Azad bhai jhoot k paaon hota hai bal kay jhoot k chaar paaon hotai hai
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thanx chand_chehra n Rukhsarbibi 4 makin it more
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kaun kehta hai
tum mere saath nahi ho
tum tou
meri rooh mai ho
meri ankhoon mai ho
meri baatoon mai ho
meri saansoon mai ho
mere dil mai ho
mere dil ki dharkan mai ho
mere khawaboon mai ho
mere khyaloon mai ho
mere saaz mai ho
meri pyaas mai ho
meri aas mai ho
meri awaz mai ho

BrokenSky · April 8, 2004, 2:06pm

Dilsay · April 11, 2004, 7:33pm

Kuch chzain adhroori he achi lagtee hain...

Adhoori ghazal adhoori nazam... :)