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kat hi gai judai bhi kab yun hua ke mar gaye
tere bhi din guzar gaye mere bhi din guzar gaye
tu bhi kuch aur aur hai ham bhi kuch aur aur hain
jane wo tu kidhar gaya jane wo ham kidhar gaye
rahon main hi mile the ham rahen nasib ban gain
tu bhi na apne ghar gaya ham bhi na apne ghar gaye
wo bhi gubar-e-Khak tha ham bhi gubar-e-khak the
wo bhi kahin bikhar gaya ham bhi kahin bikhar gaye
koi kinar-e-ab-e-ju baitha hua hai sarnigun
kashti kidhar chali gai jane kidhar bhanwar gaye
tere liye chale the ham tere liye thehar gaye
tu ne kaha to ji uthe tu ne kaha to mar gaye
waqt hi kuch judai ka itna tavil ho gaya
dil men tere firaq ke jitne the zaKhm bhar gaye
barish-e-vasl wo hui sara gubar dhul gaya
wo bhi nikhar nikhar gaya ham bhi nikhar nikhar gaye
itne qarib ho gaye itne raqib ho gaye
wo bhi “Adeem” dar gaya ham bhi “Adeem” dar gaye
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rajey
November 18, 2009, 8:05am
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Re: kat hi gai judai bhi kab yun hua ke mar gaye..
**barish-e-vasl wo hui sara gubar dhul gaya
wo bhi nikhar nikhar gaya ham bhi nikhar nikhar gaye
itne qarib ho gaye itne raqib ho gaye
wo bhi “Adeem” dar gaya ham bhi “Adeem” dar gaye
Aakhiri lines hi muddey se kuchh alag si hain… baqi to acchha khasa likha hai **SUASSHAH [COLOR=SeaGreen]badhai!
Re: kat hi gai judai bhi kab yun hua ke mar gaye..
fantastic work,bohat acha likha zabardast.
Aqls
November 19, 2009, 1:00pm
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Re: kat hi gai judai bhi kab yun hua ke mar gaye..
should nt this be in intekhaab ??
nice sharing
Re: kat hi gai judai bhi kab yun hua ke mar gaye..
thnx to all..
should nt this be in intekhaab ??
nice sharing
can u tel me of wohse it is?i thought it is of suashah.
KKF
November 20, 2009, 4:13am
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**yeh Ghazal kaii sites par kaii muKhtalif naamoN se post hai…walla aalam bissawaab
yeh google search kaa link hai:**
Google
Re: kat hi gai judai bhi kab yun hua ke mar gaye..
Ye google search ka link nahi hay... Ye ghazal asal main Poet Adeem Hashmi ki hay aur isi style main hay ....
KKF
November 20, 2009, 4:34am
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Ye google search ka link nahi hay... Ye ghazal asal main Poet Adeem Hashmi ki hay aur isi style main hay ....
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bro, on that page there are several links and all ur ash'aar are contained in one or the other Ghazals...u have to look closely.
to yeh Ghazal aapkii nahiiN hai to ise intiKhaab meN honaa chaahiye...sho'ra-e-GS meN aapkii apnii shaa'irii honii chaahiye...isii logoN ko ai'taraaz huaa aur jo jaaiz bhi hai.**
Re: kat hi gai judai bhi kab yun hua ke mar gaye..
sorry for that ...
bro, on that page there are several links and all ur ash'aar are contained in one or the other Ghazals...u have to look closely.
to yeh Ghazal aapkii nahiiN hai to ise intiKhaab meN honaa chaahiye...sho'ra-e-GS meN aapkii apnii shaa'irii honii chaahiye...isii logoN ko ai'taraaz huaa aur jo jaaiz bhi hai.
thanx 4 telin.
KKF
November 20, 2009, 4:56am
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sorry for that ...
its ok bro...keep posting good stuff :)
Re: kat hi gai judai bhi kab yun hua ke mar gaye..
thnku ji... :)
neha
November 21, 2009, 4:10pm
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Re: kat hi gai judai bhi kab yun hua ke mar gaye..
fantastic:)
Re: kat hi gai judai bhi kab yun hua ke mar gaye..
thnx ..