kashtiaan nahi miltean

Re: kashtiaan nahi miltean

bohet ache nazm heye, bheegiyaad.
especially, bheid or secret that you underscored.
thanks for sharing.
your nazm inspired this:

inhi samndaroon ka rukh badel jata heye akser,
jeb kinareye nahi milteye
in seye apna aap sameita nahi jata...
yeye jo aik pasbaan keshti ko
sirf dabona chahteye hein,
apni lehroon kee theise seye
apneye pani keye herr,
bey-sans raileye meye
apni hee lehroon ka shikaar bhenteye hein
yeye samender...
jeb berpa hoteye hein
in kee kudi meye aiseye aiseye saraab
keye in keye wajood ka sermaya
jo janein hotee hein,
wohh in ko inn keye hal per
akser chowr deitee hein
wohh in ko in keye hal per
akser chowr deitee hein

best,
Dushwari