***pyar k samandar mein har utarnay valay ko
kashtiaan nahi miltean
door door tak janaa’n!! dhoop ki musafat hai
aur kahin b pal bhar ko dhoop k musafir par
saibaan nahi khultay
is ajeeb samandar mein,umr ki rayazat kay
baad hum nay jana hai
jis tarhaan fizaoun mein urnay walay panchee par
bars ha bar mein bhi aasma’n nahi khultay
raazdaa’n nahi miltay,bam-o-dar nai khultay
har utarnay walay ko
kashtiyaan nahi miltean
aur mil bhi jaean tou bad’baan nahi khultay
pyar kay samandar mein bhaid , bhaid rehta hai ***
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***pyar k samandar mein har utarnay valay ko
kashtiaan nahi miltean
agree nice one :)
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hmmm nice g
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pyar k samandar mein har utarnay valay ko kashtiaan nahi miltean door door tak janaa'n!! dhoop ki musafat hai aur kahin b pal bhar ko dhoop k musafir par saibaan nahi khultay is ajeeb samandar mein,umr ki rayazat kay baad hum nay jana hai jis tarhaan fizaoun mein urnay walay panchee par bars ha bar mein bhi aasma'n nahi khultay raazdaa'n nahi miltay,bam-o-dar nai khultay har utarnay walay ko kashtiyaan nahi miltean aur mil bhi jaean tou bad'baan nahi khultay **pyar kay samandar mein bhaid , bhaid rehta hai **
Beautiful sharing
:)
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:biggthumb ummm
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**^^ u actually understood it??? 
nice one bheegi! kesi ho tum. aaj kal pm kyun nahi karti- pyar shart pe nahi karten- ke tum mujhe pm karo aur mei tumhe. shiddat ik taraf zyada ho toh aur mazaa hei- therefore keep pm-ing me 
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Beautiful sharing bheegi
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pyar k samandar mein har utarnay valay ko
kashtiaan nahi miltean
hmmmm... ya.. its good
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nice sharing bheegi :k:
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thanx eve one 
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Nice :k:
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beautiful
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beautiful....
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thanx shab ,DS and red
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bohet ache nazm heye, bheegiyaad.
especially, bheid or secret that you underscored.
thanks for sharing.
your nazm inspired this:
inhi samndaroon ka rukh badel jata heye akser,
jeb kinareye nahi milteye
in seye apna aap sameita nahi jata...
yeye jo aik pasbaan keshti ko
sirf dabona chahteye hein,
apni lehroon kee theise seye
apneye pani keye herr,
bey-sans raileye meye
apni hee lehroon ka shikaar bhenteye hein
yeye samender...
jeb berpa hoteye hein
in kee kudi meye aiseye aiseye saraab
keye in keye wajood ka sermaya
jo janein hotee hein,
wohh in ko inn keye hal per
akser chowr deitee hein
wohh in ko in keye hal per
akser chowr deitee hein
best,
Dushwari
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Bohat khoob Bheegiyaad & Dushwari...