apne ahsaas se choo kar mujhe sandal kr do,
main ke sadioun se adoora hoon mokammal kar do..
na tumain hosh rahe aur na mujhe hosh rahe,
is qadder toot ke chaho mujhe pagal kar do…:Pretty:
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
aa jaao k abhi zabt ka mousam baqi hai
aa jaao k abhi paharon pe baraf jami hai
khushboo k jzeeron se sitaron ki hadon tak
sab kuc ha hai iss sheher mein teri kami hai
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
wah wah ...kia shaairy hai
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
shukriya
by the way kis shayri ki tareef ho rahi hai :P
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
aap ki shaairy ki...ooper wali wasi shah ki hai..i don like him...yeh aap k apne sher thay ya kissy aur k thay???
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
thay kisi or ki hi , lekin pasand meri hai
:P
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
achi passand hai...do u read???urdu or english?? u like poetry???
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
both
lekin mein kisi poet ka craze nahi hoon
but i like good poetry kisi ki bi ho
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
wah wah
yeh lo meri
hamare dil main dhadkan aapki sunai deti hai
aakhon main soorat aapki dikhayi deti hai
chalte toh hum hain lekin mudte hai to parchayi aapki dekhayi deti hai
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
wah bhai...yeh rizu k liay hai naa?????
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
haaan
yeh suno
Raat ki tanhai mein unko awaaz diya karte hain,raat mein sitaaron se unka zikre kiya karte hain,wo ayen ya na ayen humare khwabon mein,hum to bus unhi ka intezaar main aahe liya karte hain..
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka…
baa zoq log aise nahi kahte…
anyway…yeh kaisa hai…
see rahi thi jis se chaake dil maira us ki nazar
piar ka woh reshmi dhaga bohat baareek tha
door hatte hatte phir mujh hi se aa takraey aap
aap ne dekha main kitna aap ke nazdeek tha
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
acha hai...JHEEL main baa zoq hoon magar WASI SHAH ki yeh shaaiyree sun sun ker kaan pak gai hain....to be honest it is a beautiful piece of poetry..pehlay passand thi ab nahee....any ways,,,,jheel ,,,tell me abt urself!!!
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka…
hello dear…
kuch ashar aap ke liey aur aap ke UN ke liey.waise main hood bhi shairee karti hoon poori book likh dali…
lekin yeh mairee nahi..
mile hum kabhi to aise ke hijaab bhool jaey
main sawal bhool jaon woh jawab bhool jaey
jab kabhi too parhne bathe mujhe haraf haraf dekhe
teree aankhain bheeg jain too kitab bhool jaey
teree soch per ho haavi mairee yaad is trah se
ke too apni zindagi ka her nisaab bhool jaey.
with best wihes:flower2:
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka…
wah kia baat hai:lajawab:
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
wah bhai jheel....i was used to do english poetry wen i was young...ab urdu main likhtee hoon!!!poetry nahee...short stories aur mini novels!!!
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
boohot doore janye ko jee chaheta hia,,..
un haye azma nay ko jee chaheta hia
hamein un say koi shiqayat nahi hia
yooun hee rhoooot janaye ko jee cha hee ta hia
faqat hai yahee un kee nazroon ka dhoka
kay dhokay may aanay ko jee chaheta hia :)
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
good...khud likha????
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
hmm :)
Re: kash main tere haseen hath ka.....
apna pan bhi is beganey pan mein hai
poora aalam ik deewane pan mein hai
yeh jo tum se mein aanjaan bana phirta hoon
sari baat issi anjaane pan mein hai