Kaash
k kabhi ham milen
kisi rim jim barastey mosam mein
kabhi sarma ki meethi dhoop mein
kabhi garma ki sunsaan dupeher mein
kisi per k thandey saye mein
main tumharey kandhey per sar rakhey
sunati jaun
baten kuch poori c
khuahishen kuch adhoori c
meri ankh k sapney
utrein tumhari ankhon mein
tabeer un ki la k tum
rakh do merey hathon mein
kash k wo aik pal
bas wahin tham jaye…
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
very nice toooooooooooo
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
Achi khuwaahish hey, my best wishes with you :)
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
thx amal and decent
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye…
Wah wah, very nice!
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
Rani Ji.... Aadab,
Bari masoom aur original nazm kahi aapne....
jhansi bara historical shahr hai, kabhi iss shahr ke bare main bhi kuch likhhen.
iss nazm aur natural wishes ke liye best wishes.
darwesh.
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
nice
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye…
ye pal nahi tehratey 
pata nahi kyun…kyun…
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
Bari masoom aur original nazm kahi aapne.... jhansi bara historical shahr hai, kabhi iss shahr ke bare main bhi kuch likhhen. iss nazm aur natural wishes ke liye best wishes.
darwesh.
thx darwesh, lekin asal bat ye hai k main likhna chor chuki hun or jo kuch bhi aap logon ki nazar kar rahi hun wo meri diary k safhey hain jo k main ney pehley kabhi taba azmai ki thi:) agar kuch naya likha to inshaallah zaroor post karun gi, duyaon mein yaad rakhiye ga
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
very nice sharing.....!
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
*Lagta Hay meri nazam say mutas'er ho kar yah khubsurat nazam takhleeq key hay aap nay:D .....
welldone Rani G *
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
sanan g aap ki itla k liye arz hai jaisa k ooper b likha ye takhleeq 1 saal purani hai
anyhow,,,,, tareef ka shukriya
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye…
Masha Allah bohat acha likha hai.
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye…
Main bhi yahi karti hoon.
Per aap nain likhna kioon chora?
Main nain to is liay chora kay shairi aisi jis main aisi batain hon jo hum naheen kartay wo naheen karna chahyay ba mutabiq quran.
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
thx masoom c larki 4 liking
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
Jab mein nae iis nazam ka title dekha toh meri ami mere zahen mein theeeeeN aur nazam perhany k doraan bhi sara waqt wohi mere zahen mein theeeN.....aur mein nae waqai yeh feel kiya k jaisay mein uun k saath hoon....aur wo sab uun se share ker rahi hoon jo mein kerna chahti theee.............Thx for sucha beautiful poem...
Thxxxxxxxxxxxx a lot....
Re: kash k wo pal bas wahin tham jaye...
thx muslim girl, ap ko meri nazam parney k doran apni ammi ki mojudgi feel hui ye bat merey liye bais -e- fakhar hai,umeed hai aap ainda b nazmon pe tabsara jari rakhen gi