Kanch ki chooreyyan aur khuwaab

Bhooli_Bisri · February 8, 2003, 8:29am

ap sab ki be-panaah muhabat ko dekh kar mujhe be-had khushi horahe hai ap sab ki mein mashkor hon ke ap ne meri pehli kavish ko baess-e-taref samjha. aj phir ap sab ki nazar ek aur khobsurat kavish jis ka unwaan hai ‘Kaanch ki chooreyyan aur Khuwaab’

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Jaise kanch ki chooreyyan haseeen hotee hain
Khuwaab bhi dil-nashin hotey hain
Jaise kanch ki chooreyyan kallaeyyoon mein sajti hain
Khuwaab bhi palkoon mein sajtay hain
Jaise kanch ki chooreyyan gungunaatti hain
Khuwaab bhi dharkan ka sur ban jatay hain
Jaise kanch ki chooreyyan larkeyo ka zaivar hain
Khuwaab bhi larkeyo ki ankh ka kajal hain
Magar janaaan
Jaise kanch ki chooreyyan toot jaati hain
Aur kircheyyan kallaeyyoon mein chubh jati hain
Khuwaab bhi tu bikhar jate hain
Aur ansoo ban kar ankh mein utar ate hain
Dekho tu kanch ki chooreyyan aur khuwaab
Donoo kitne milte julte hain**

Ap sab ki taref aur tanqeed ki mein muntazir rahongi

Capricorn · February 8, 2003, 8:48am

buhat khoobsurat nazam hai bhooli bisrii…zabardast khayal aur khoobsurat hurrof istaimaal kiye gaye hain…and the comparison between khwab aur chooriyaan is excellent :k: Who is the author?

Amal · February 8, 2003, 1:31pm

Re: Kanch ki chooreyyan aur khuwaab

Aek khoobsoorat ghazal ke baad aek khoobsoorat
nazm:k:…Thanx a lot for posting your work here.
I hope we will see more of your poetry:)

Dilsay · February 8, 2003, 3:19pm

I agree with Amal.....

Guest7777 · February 8, 2003, 4:27pm

Bhooli buhat acha likha hai aap nai isi terah apni poetry ainda bhi post kerti rehain...

chand_chehra · February 9, 2003, 6:55am

bohat khoob bholibisri sis :k:
keep e’m coming

Philanthrope · February 9, 2003, 3:00pm

Very hi nice yaar… lovely :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 9, 2003, 6:03pm

Beautiful

Dragon_King · February 9, 2003, 6:23pm

nice

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 9, 2003, 8:10pm

Re: Kanch ki chooreyyan aur khuwaab

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Bhooli Bisri: *
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Jaise kanch ki chooreyyan haseeen hotee hain
Khuwaab bhi dil-nashin hotey hain
Jaise kanch ki chooreyyan kallaeyyoon mein sajti hain
Khuwaab bhi palkoon mein sajtay hain
Jaise kanch ki chooreyyan gungunaatti hain
Khuwaab bhi dharkan ka sur ban jatay hain
Jaise kanch ki chooreyyan larkeyo ka zaivar hain
Khuwaab bhi larkeyo ki ankh ka kajal hain
Magar janaaan
Jaise kanch ki chooreyyan toot jaati hain
Aur kircheyyan kallaeyyoon mein chubh jati hain
Khuwaab bhi tu bikhar jate hain
Aur ansoo ban kar ankh mein utar ate hain
Dekho tu kanch ki chooreyyan aur khuwaab
Donoo kitne milte julte hain**

[/QUOTE]

Beautiful BB jii, keep it up & Thanks for sharing:)

Sehar · February 10, 2003, 2:51am

Buhat khoob :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 10, 2003, 3:12am

Re: Kanch ki chooreyyan aur khuwaab

bothu khoob:k::k:
keep it up:)

Paglee · February 10, 2003, 9:41pm

bohat khoob thanks 4 sharing Bhooli..:)