kaliyaan...

*gulshan ko baharon ne is tarah nawaaza hai
har shaakh ke kaandhe par kaliyon ka janaza hai *

hmmmmmmm

chupeeeeY

hummm

Boht khoob.. :k:

:k:

Nice :k:

Ab muhabbatein sochoon tu ik dard dil mei uthta hai
kaise kahoo’n kiya gham mere naam kar gayi teri aik nazar

nice one maheeno :)

hmmmm

  • mat ghabra aye pyaase dariya... sooraj aane wala hai barf pahadon se pighli to jal hi jal ho jayega :) *

thanks...

hame shok-e azeeyat hai wagarna iss zamaane mei
teri yaadein bhulaane ko bohat samaan rakha hai

hmmm bahot khoob....

  • jab kabhi bolna soch kar bolna muddaton sochna, mukhtasar bolna...*

wah wah…this sher is going straight to my poetry collection :k:

apni matti pe hi chalne ka saleeqa seekho
sang-e marr marr pe chalo ge tu phisal jao ge

wah jee wah....nice one...simple and direct...

*pathar ke khuda, pathar ke sanam pathar ke hi insaan paaye hai
tum sheher-e-muhabbat kehte ho, hum jaan bacha kar aaye hai...
*

good one :k:

bahaarein le gaya mujh se, khazaein de gaya mujh ko
wo shakhs itni muhabbat mei sazaaein de gaya mujh ko

Hassan Ali Mehmood

this is the sher from the 'mukhtasar bolna' wali ghazal

  • mer khana badoshi se poochein koi kitna mushkil hai raaste ko ghar bolna...*

good good :k:

hum na hota tu kissi aur ke charche hote
halqat-e shehar tu kehne ko fasaane maange

Ahmed Faraaz

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