Amal ki nazm** Muhubat ki rasmin**
MeiN jaaney laga to roney lagi wo
meiN laot ke aaya to phir ro parri wo
pehley jaaney pe roi — phir aaney pe roi
pehley khoney pe roi — phir paaney pe roi
meiN ney poocha in ashqoN ka matlab hey kya!
haNs ke boli, tumhaarey safar ka ik chotta sa sadqa
in maasoom jazboN ko deikha to jaana
mohabbat ki rasmeiN bhi kitni haseeN heiN!!!**
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Bohut Khoob
Khushkhabri keep em sharing
Re: Kalam-e-Amal bazaban-e-GN
lyrical :) feels like i have heard it orread it before. Maybe in some old thread of his. Keep sharing anyway.
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Darwesh kay kalam kay baad kalam-e-Amal~ Gunnu Jee! :biggthumb
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^^^^and u ne kaha tah u ko poetry ke semg nehe ate 
Re: Kalam-e-Amal bazaban-e-GN
^ perha kis ny hy:wink:
Very nice GN bohat khoob
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Adab arz uza:rose:
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zabardast..!! Goodnews..!! kia pesh kia hai..!! wah :) aadaab :)
amooman hum kissi bhi serious ya achay qism keh dhagay main entry maartaay hain to us dhagay ki taangay torr kar.. mera matbal hai.. dil to kar raha hai keh hum bhi kuch toota phoota sa arz karain.. par.. hum ko phooloun keh bajayay jootay milaingay..!! waisya bhi mera joota phatnay wala hai..! :D
Jokes on the side.. nice work.. keep it up :)
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Ap ki awaz bohat duur se aa rahi hai :( but nice job
Re: Kalam-e-Amal bazaban-e-GN
hahahah Gn yaar app ka andaaz baray mzay ka tha
khas tor per jub app nay kaha
in Askhoon ka mutlub hay kia : D
Ki karan ty kithy jawan,**khyr **mehrbani sunnan di ty kehn di:D
Asal maza chekh o pukar ki koshish ki waja sy nahi a sak raha:hehe: ky awaz banati hon misry ki roh ky mutabiq ti awaz record hi nahi hoti:cb:
**Meri nazrin bold & underlined text sy yeh mani akhaz ker rahi hain ky,
Hasrat hy GN ko joota phynk maron
Inbrat hy ky woh bhi phatny ko hy
Dar hy GN ky hath lag giya tu
Khtma bilkhyr yaqqeni joty ka
Or hamin nangy pyr jana pery ga
Conclussion:
Hasrat or ghunchon per ju bin khliy murjha giy:wink:
**
Awesome Thread GN.
**Amal **was one of the best person that this site has lost... I wish he could come back.
One of the reasons for me to stick around in poetry even when my self respect never wanted me to. But because of the great friend in the face of Amal, I sticked around. Surely, I gradually moved away from there after his departure. I had no choice. I wish poetry forum could have done something creative much like the creative work and dedication Amal had shown there. There is so much the forum can do. It just lingers around traditional stuff. Well, anyway... my little contribution to Amal...
Kalaam-e-Amal ba zubaan-e-AQ :)
I will dig out some of his poems and keep this thread alive wishing to see him back ... It's been a year now... how time passes and good friends departs...
Amal, if you ever see this, know that I still miss an awesome friend.
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maza nehe aea mere pese wapes kero :ASA:
**Buhat hi khub anno Buhat piyari shairi hy ye Amal ki ju tum ny muntakhib ki shukriya:bb:
Lamha khushi ka hu y aghari dill dukhany ki
Osy her bat py adat thi muskurany ki:)
Mor judai ka aya tu toot ky rony laga
Ham ny koshish tu buhat ki osy samjhnay ki:lajawab:
**
Is ky bary main kiya khiyal hy:aq:
**teri Arzo ko ly ky main kahan kahan na bhatka
Per Milli na Koi bushra mujhy mujzoon ky dar sy?
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