kal tak woh saath thi mere ab door hai mujhse
uss k saath jo hai guzra mujhay woh waqt la do
jab se uss se bichara hu waqt tham sa gya hai
uss k saath jo guzray hai mujhay woh pal la do
hoti thi woh jab saath rehta tha darr bicharnay ka
uss k saath yeh bichara hua mujhay darr la do
hoti thi saath tou umeedein thi bhut zindagi se
uss k saath hi chali gyi zindagi tou mujhay maut la do
hoti jab thi woh saath mere tou Duniya meri thi
Suhail uss k saath gya mera wajood mujhay la do
Re: kal tak woh saath thi mere ab door hai mujhse
fantastic…lakin mein tumhein boaht zinda dil kisam ka insaan samjhti hoon
itni sad poetry nah kiya kero:clap: but very nice.
Re: kal tak woh saath thi mere ab door hai mujhse
thanx
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jo dil mai hai ussay mai sirf lafzo mai jornay ki NAKKAM koshish karta hu
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shukria GS
Re: kal tak woh saath thi mere ab door hai mujhse
bohat kam log waqif hein sukhan aasar lamhon se
jinhein mehsoos kerty hein usey likha nahi jata
Re: kal tak woh saath thi mere ab door hai mujhse
Kia baat hai ji.:)
"Khatm kar di ghazal aap ne aye mere dost
Upne beete hue chand lumhaat aur la do"
Re: kal tak woh saath thi mere ab door hai mujhse
wah ji wah kia kehnay hai app k:k:
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UA: thanx n nice sher
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like always…Speechless!!
bohut khoobsurat 
p.s ur shaeeri really touches the heart!!
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zabardast!!! 
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cool yaar very very nice
specially like the last line
Re: kal tak woh saath thi mere ab door hai mujhse
bloody fantastic poem 
it actually brought tears to my eyes:hug:
