kal say in aankhouN ...

fghd · February 16, 2007, 2:31pm

Kal say in aankhouN nay kuch parha nahee
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ahum arz kiya hai …*
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Kal say in aankhouN nay kuch parha nahee
souch raheeN houN aaj bhi kuch na parhouN

parhnay ka kiya faeDah jabb kuch samajh nahee
dil-o-deemagh kaheeN phansa tou mai kiya karouN

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aDaaB

Shikra · February 16, 2007, 2:33pm

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mashallah

fghd · February 16, 2007, 2:34pm

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thankyou

Krypton · February 16, 2007, 2:57pm

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so whers the rest…

fghd · February 16, 2007, 4:00pm

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^ i tried to write 2 more lines

AQ · February 16, 2007, 4:00pm

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Is it a sher?

it will only make a sher if there was another accompanying sher with it rhyming with "kuch naa paRhooN"

Otherwise, it does not belong to this section and should be moved to elsewhere. Abuse of resources :P

Kal say in aankhouN nay kuch parha nahee
souch raheeN houN aaj bhi kuch na parhouN

agar kuch naa paRhooN tau fail ho jaaouN gee
kiyaa khiyaaL hai kiouN naa Flooding hee karooN

There!... it is legalized now :)

fghd · February 16, 2007, 4:03pm

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^ lol look again i wrote something

AQ · February 16, 2007, 4:05pm

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nice come back

I will suggest Amal to have a sub section of Funny Poetry section of Shoa'ra-e-Gupshup. May I suggest a name? Kasht-e-Za'afraan-e-Numaaindagan :)

fghd · February 16, 2007, 4:06pm

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^ hahahahaha Kiya? hahahahahaha khekehkehekhe

:k:

btw Amal .. male/female?

AQ · February 16, 2007, 4:07pm

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you dun even know that?
perhaps mods only participate in threads opened by each other or ehsan bhai

fghd · February 16, 2007, 4:08pm

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I sachi don’t know

tell me na ..

AQ · February 16, 2007, 4:12pm

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laakh rastoN ke khudaaoN ney mooN morr liya
dil ye chahata hey tujh sey milney ki koi tarkeeb miley!

He is a male mod from Dubai

Only one mod in the whole Gupshup I admire

fghd · February 16, 2007, 4:14pm

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Male? sachi? nowim gonna post here regularly

btw niiiiiiiiiiiiceeee sherrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :k: wah!

AQ · February 16, 2007, 4:18pm

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it was Amal's :)

fghd · February 16, 2007, 4:20pm

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bohut hi khoobb :k:

AQ · February 16, 2007, 4:24pm

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If you look in this very forum, that whole poem is just few threads under you thread :-)

NikamiJano · February 18, 2007, 5:16pm

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:halo: sari raat kahani suntey rahya subha uth k poocha Zulaikhaa’N
aurat thei ya mard D

fghd · February 18, 2007, 8:27pm

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^ mainey kabhi amal say baat hi nahee ki

koi baat nahee soon I will

pk786 · February 19, 2007, 12:38pm

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wah wha kya baat hai aur kya soch hai

fghd · February 22, 2007, 5:04am

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^ shukriya