enter10
November 28, 2014, 5:50pm
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Kal raat tanha tha main,dehaan mein tum thay**
Tehreer mein tum thay,meray wajdaan mein tum thay
Ahat thi k betaab kiye deti thi mujh ko
Ehsaas yeh kehta tha k dalaan mein tum thay
Go ajnabi dastak thi magar main ne dar-e-jaah
Yeh soch k khola tha k imkaan mein tum thay
Main kia, sitaron ne bhi aankh na jhapki thi
kal shab shab-e-mehtaab thi aur dalaan mein tum thay
Kia dekhtay auron ki taraf hum se giraftaar
Har ehad mein tum thay / har paimaan mein tum thay
Har chashm-e-gul-e-tarr thi tehreer zada AZHAR
Kia waqt-e-sehar mun-e-gulistan mein tum thay.
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Re: Kal raat tanha tha main,dehaan mein tum thay
**Ahat thi k betaab kiye deti thi mujh ko
**Ehsaas yeh kehta tha k dalaan mein tum thay
chor se muhabbat?****
LP
December 7, 2014, 6:46pm
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Re: Kal raat tanha tha main,dehaan mein tum thay
Muqa can you tell me exact meanings of every line here plz Main kia, sitaron ne bhi aankh na jhapki thi
kal shab shab-e-mehtaab thi aur dalaan mein tum thay
Kia dekhtay auron ki taraf hum se giraftaar
Har ehad mein tum thay / har paimaan mein tum thay
Har chashm-e-gul-e-tarr thi tehreer zada AZHAR
Kia waqt-e-sehar mun-e-gulistan mein tum thay
Re: Kal raat tanha tha main,dehaan mein tum thay
per ye to @enter10 ne post ki hai.
Its simply that shayar ko apne mehboob ke ilawa kuch nazar nahin aata
Re: Kal raat tanha tha main,dehaan mein tum thay
Main kia, sitaron ne bhi aankh na jhapki thi
kal shab shab-e-mehtaab thi aur dalaan mein tum thay
(matlab ye ke na sirf shayar balke sitare bhi bhi shab e mehtaab (full moon -14th night) daalan (aangan) main bethe huwe
mehboob ko dekhte rahe)
Kia dekhtay auron ki taraf hum se giraftaar
Har ehad mein tum thay / har paimaan mein tum thay
(same meaning. her tarf tum hi tum ho)
LP
December 7, 2014, 6:51pm
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Re: Kal raat tanha tha main,dehaan mein tum thay
But I didn't understand all the 'tareef' waley alfaz shayar used :(
Re: Kal raat tanha tha main,dehaan mein tum thay
But I didn't understand all the 'tareef' waley alfaz shayar used :(
maine tarjuma kar dia hai. baqi jo alfaaz samajh nahin aae wo likh den
LP
December 7, 2014, 7:13pm
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Sorry just saw the post where you explained.
Re: Kal raat tanha tha main,dehaan mein tum thay
Shab e mehtab , giraftar(didn't get what it means in this poem), paimaan, ehad ,
shab e mehtaab = poore chand ki raat.. 14th night
girftaar = aseer = occupied = committed
paiman = ehad = promise / dtermination
LP
December 7, 2014, 7:15pm
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maine tarjuma kar dia hai. baqi jo alfaaz samajh nahin aae wo likh den
The last 2 lines too plz
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Har chashm-e-gul-e-tarr thi tehreer zada AZHAR
Kia waqt-e-sehar mun-e-gulistan mein tum thay
ye mujhe bhi kuch ziada palle nahin paRi. shayar is just repeating his thoughts throughout the Ghazal. In these lines he might be saying that ‘subh subh jo phoolon main tazgi hai. freshness. Its just becuase unka mehboob subh subh garden ka chakar laga ke aaya hoga’. phenkne wali poetry
LP
December 7, 2014, 7:25pm
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That’s cute poetry
PS: Thank you for explaining it all:hat:
Laiha
December 8, 2014, 3:26am
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very nice poem but why is 'dalaan' used twice?
enter10
December 9, 2014, 9:15am
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Har chashm-e-gul-e-tarr thi tehreer zada AZHAR
Kia waqt-e-sehar mun-e-gulistan mein tum thay
ye mujhe bhi kuch ziada palle nahin paRi. shayar is just repeating his thoughts throughout the Ghazal. In these lines he might be saying that ‘subh subh jo phoolon main tazgi hai. freshness. Its just becuase unka mehboob subh subh garden ka chakar laga ke aaya hoga’. phenkne wali poetry
…:k:
enter10
December 9, 2014, 9:18am
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very nice poem but why is 'dalaan' used twice?
sha`ir ki apni property hy.........jitna marzi use kary....:p
Aap k Dalaan mein to nhi tehal raha na................?
Laiha
December 9, 2014, 7:53pm
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Re: Kal raat tanha tha main,dehaan mein tum thay
haha mujhe tu koi problem nahi but yeh @muqawwee123 ko bohut si problems hain. I am surprised he didn’t pick on the word repetition there. :cb:
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Laiha
December 9, 2014, 7:53pm
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:emmy: