~ Kal aur Aaj ~

Amarbail1 · May 6, 2003, 6:05am

Maazee ka koi khayal aksar Mere tanhaayee aur Mere veeraanee Ko cheertay huwe Taizi se daur jaata hai Aur Mere khamoosh lamhon mein Aik shor machaa jaata hai Wakt wakt ke baat hai... Kal tak Main unheen khayaaloon ke Train per sawaar thee Ek hamsafar bhee sung thaa Manzil ke justujoo bhi thee Magar aaj... Na koi hamsafar hi saath hai Na hi kisi safar per hoon main Bass... Apne veeraan zindagi ke Platform per tanha khari Maazi ke khayaloon ko Aksar daurtay bhaagtay Dekhteen hoon Na kisi manzil kee Mujhe talaash hai Na hi koi manzil Mere muntazir hai

Dilsay · May 6, 2003, 6:45am

Masha Allah this is simply great... thanks for sharing

Nazam · May 6, 2003, 7:00am

:k:

chand_chehra · May 6, 2003, 5:28pm

Nice :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · May 6, 2003, 7:48pm

bohat khoooooooob :k:

BrokenSky · May 6, 2003, 9:03pm

Buhat Khoob:k:…
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Galaxy · May 7, 2003, 2:25am

nice:k:

Twister · May 7, 2003, 2:36am

:k:

_Passionate · May 7, 2003, 4:42am

wonderful :k:

Philanthrope · May 7, 2003, 6:28am

Is this your own effort? If it is.. then no doubt its a lovely kavish...:~)

keep writing...

Amarbail1 · May 7, 2003, 12:50pm

Yes, it was a little effort made and I am glad that you all appreciated, thanks again !

XkanwalX · May 7, 2003, 1:48pm

nicnice.. :)

BoReD_iN_BrIsBaNe · May 7, 2003, 2:52pm

kool:k:

Rabia_Chaudhry · May 7, 2003, 5:33pm

bohet khooob:smokin: