kaisey kaisey wasl guzarey hijr ka zakhm chhupa'ney main

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal June 3, 2008, 3:39am 1

***kitney mousam sargardaa’N they mujh sey hath milaney meiN
maiN ne sha’yed dair kar di khood sey bahar aaney meiN

Ik nigha ka sanaa’ta hai ik aawaz ka banjar paN
maiN kitna tanha betha hooN qurbat k vee’raney meiN

bistar sey karwat ka rishta toot gaya ik yaad k sath
khwab sarha’ney sey uth betha taki’ya ko sar’kaney meiN

baat bana’ney wali raa’tein rang nikh’rney waley diN
kin rastooN par chor aaya maiN umr ka sath nibha’ney meiN

aik malal ki gard sametey maiN ney khood ko paar kia
kaisey kaisey wasl guzarey hijr ka zakhm chhupa’ney main

jitney dukh they jitni umeedein sab sey brabar kaam lia
main ney apney ainda ki ik tasweer bananey main

aik wazahat k lamhey main mujh par ye aeh’waal khula
kitni mushkil paish aati hai apna haal bataney main

muddii June 3, 2008, 4:21am 2

fantastic koyal ji:)

aabla_pa June 3, 2008, 6:19am 3

Re: kaisey kaisey wasl guzarey hijr ka zakhm chhupa’ney main

Its Nice. :k:

Shumaisa June 3, 2008, 8:44am 4

Re: kaisey kaisey wasl guzarey hijr ka zakhm chhupa’ney main

Wahh Koyal.. :k:
You really have a very gud choice.

being_lonely June 3, 2008, 11:07am 5

Re: kaisey kaisey wasl guzarey hijr ka zakhm chhupa’ney main

bistar sey karwat ka rishta toot gaya ik yaad k sath
khwab sarha’ney sey uth betha taki’ya ko sar’kaney meiN

Bohat umda kuku jee :k:

Shab-e-Hijar June 3, 2008, 5:14pm 6

bohaaat khooob :k:

Aryaan June 3, 2008, 6:36pm 7

Re: kaisey kaisey wasl guzarey hijr ka zakhm chhupa’ney main

Bohat khoob Koyal..:k:

SunnyBoy June 4, 2008, 12:56am 8

Re: kaisey kaisey wasl guzarey hijr ka zakhm chhupa’ney main

nice :k:

Koyal June 4, 2008, 4:09am 9

thanks shumi

GuL-e-Tasbeeh June 4, 2008, 7:32am 10

buhat khoob :-)

Koyal June 5, 2008, 3:42am 11

thanks Gul and welcome back :)

abeeha June 5, 2008, 9:27am 12

Re: kaisey kaisey wasl guzarey hijr ka zakhm chhupa'ney main

koyal kahan se aya hai itni collection itni achi achi poems ki...its again very nice.

muncho June 5, 2008, 1:24pm 13

Re: kaisey kaisey wasl guzarey hijr ka zakhm chhupa'ney main

aik malal ki gard sametey maiN ney khood ko paar kia
kaisey kaisey wasl guzarey hijr ka zakhm chhupa'ney main

jitney dukh they jitni umeedein sab sey brabar kaam lia
main ney apney ainda ki ik tasweer bananey main

bahut aala aur ba-kamal shairee, kia kahnay g

Ali_jee June 5, 2008, 7:12pm 14

w0w.. its beautiful..

Daanie June 5, 2008, 7:14pm 15

Re: kaisey kaisey wasl guzarey hijr ka zakhm chhupa'ney main

wonderful ji :)