kaise?

udaasaankhein · February 3, 2003, 5:21pm

kaise bhula diausne aik pal mein
un lamhoon ko jo hum ne saath guzare
un batooon ko jo us ne mujh se keen
un khwaboon ko jo us ne mujhe dikhaey
un muskarahatoon ko jo us ne mujhe deen
kaise woh mujhe yoon tanha chor gia

Dilsay · February 3, 2003, 5:41pm

Beautiful..... keep it up

Maheen2002 · February 3, 2003, 5:53pm

:k:

arifnawaz1 · February 3, 2003, 7:30pm

Re: kaise?

Bahut khoob UA :k::k::k:

Ek ghazal paish-e-khidmat hai, umeed hai aap ko pasand ayegi !

**
Har ek ko aas mein rakhne ki aadat us ko thee
Warna kyon matloob gairoon ki rafaqat us ko thee

Kaise kar leta gawarrah woh meri sansoon ki aanch
In dinoo khud apne saye se bhi wehshat us ko thee

Hijr ki ek aazmaesh se guzar jane ke baad
Saari duniya se judaee ki shikayat us ko thee

Faislay ka huq ussay hasil thaa us ne kar liya
Mujh se kab darkaar koi bhi wazaahat us ko thee

Ek khasta haal shayar kaise aasooda huwa?
Raat ek mehfil mein is nuktay pe hairat us ko thee

Ek khiloona torne ke waastay darkaar thaa
Ab mein samjha, kis liye meri zaroorat us ko thee**

BrokenSky · February 3, 2003, 7:59pm

Nice:k:

Paglee · February 4, 2003, 2:13am

nice one sad eyes...:)

Azad · February 4, 2003, 4:56am

good question :k:

Dragon_King · February 4, 2003, 6:39am

buhat khoob :k:

Lamhay · February 4, 2003, 10:30am

udaas ankhain bahut khoob !! Guzaray huay kaal ko bhula dena hi behtaar hota hai warna anay wala kaal kharab hojata hai aur jo paal aap ka nahin uskay liye apna kaal kyo gawaien kisi kay janay sey duniya tu khatum nahin hojati !

udaasaankhein · February 4, 2003, 5:22pm

dilsay and maheen, broken sky,paglee,D~k:thank u
AN :beautiful piece of poetry..thanx for sharing.
Azad: Do u have the answer?

Philanthrope · February 4, 2003, 5:50pm

khoob :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 5, 2003, 5:37am

Re: kaise?

mujhe bhi us se yehee pochna hai:crying:
anyways beautiful choice:k::k: