kaho........................

[SJ]

kaho… dukh ke sumander ka safar ab tak raha kesa?
**kaha… ujle kinare ka koi imkaan dekha hai… **
**- **
kaho… darya kinaron se bhala kia guftagu thehri?
**kaha… darya ko apne zabt pe herna dekha hai… **
**- **
kaho… q? kis liye? khola hai tum ne dil ka darwaza?
**kaha ke… dil ke raston pe koi mehmaan dekha hai… **
**- **
kaho… us ishq ki baabat, bhala kia had rahi ho gi?
**kaha… wo ishq jese rooh ka sartaan dekha hai… **
-
kaho… us se bicharhne ki… tumhen manzoor yeh ho ga?
**kaha… jaane ki khwaahish ko kabi qurban dekha hai… **
-
kaho… phir tum pe kia guzri wo khawab -e- zindagi kho ker?
kaha… kal apni aankhon ko… boht bejaan dekha hai

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: kaho…

very nice guftago :k:

poet kon hai??

agar farhat hai to us kay thread mai kyu nahi post ki

[Amal]

Re: kaho…

@soniaa_jee

kaho… dukh ke sumander ka safar ab tak raha kesa?
**kaha… ujle kinare ka koi imkaan dekha hai… **
**- **
kaho… darya kinaron se bhala kia guftagu thehri?
**kaha… darya ko apne zabt pe herna dekha hai… **
**- **
kaho… q? kis liye? khola hai tum ne dil ka darwaza?
**kaha ke… dil ke raston pe koi mehmaan dekha hai… **
**- **
kaho… us ishq ki baabat, bhala kia had rahi ho gi?
**kaha… wo ishq jese rooh ka sartaan dekha hai… **
-
kaho… us se bicharhne ki… tumhen manzoor yeh ho ga?
**kaha… jaane ki khwaahish ko kabi qurban dekha hai… **
-
kaho… phir tum pe kia guzri wo khawab -e- zindagi kho ker?
kaha… kal apni aankhon ko… boht bejaan dekha hai

Very different and very nice and good presentation k: Thanx for sharing it with us soniaa_jee.

[SJ]

Re: kaho…

@Shab-e-Hijar

very nice guftago :k:

poet kon hai??

agar farhat hai to us kay thread mai kyu nahi post ki

awww…

nahin pata na.kon hai shair:(

[m.a.d.i.h.a]

Re: kaho........................

kaho... phir tum pe kia guzri wo khawab -e- zindagi kho ker?
kaha... kal apni aankhon ko......... boht bejaan dekha hai

veryyyyyyyy nice!!!

[SJ]

Re: kaho…

@Amal

Very different and very nice and good presentation k: Thanx for sharing it with us soniaa_jee.

Thanks

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: kaho........................

mere absence mei meri bhen chhaa gayee GS pe ;)
very sweet piece Sonia.

[redidentity]

Re: kaho........................

very nice.. very different.. :)

[alimani786]

Re: kaho........................

kaho... phir tum pe kia guzri wo khawab -e- zindagi kho ker?
**kaha... kal apni aankhon ko......... boht bejaan dekha hai

Wah kia kahne hein. Superb......nice sharing,
**

[deep_ocean]

Re: kaho…

buhat khoob :k:

[sunny_nicky]

Re: kaho........................

kaho... phir tum pe kia guzri wo khawab -e- zindagi kho ker?
**kaha... kal apni aankhon ko......... boht bejaan dekha hai

nicee
**

[being_lonely]

Re: kaho…

:k: nice one sonia

[bheegiyaad]

Re: kaho........................

veryy nice sonia:)

[SJ]

Re: kaho…

@Jhanjharewali

mere absence mei meri bhen chhaa gayee GS pe
very sweet piece Sonia.

Awww…sis…app ki jagaa kon lay sakta hai:hugz:
thanks for appreciation:)

[Prince_Ali]

Re: kaho…

finally something different! thanx for sharing soniaa jee :k:

[Sheal]

Re: kaho........................

very nice :)

[High-Tech]

Re: kaho…

good stuff :k:

[EEMAAN]

Re: kaho........................

Bohat khoob sonia..

[Muslim_girl_1]

Re: kaho…

beautiful poem…thanx 4 sharin:hugz:

[arsalanh2000]

Re: kaho........................

Sonia, Its really Fantastic Poem....

and Last Shair is very Solid, Directly touches inside

I am sorry for Late entry because i just seen your threat today..

Thanks for sharing