Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
chalaa jaataa huN haNstaa, kheltaa mauj-e-Hawaadis se
agar aasaaniyaaN hoN, zindagii dushwaar ho jaaye!!!**
AsGHar Husain ‘AsGhar’ GonDvii**
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
chalaa jaataa huN haNstaa, kheltaa mauj-e-Hawaadis se
agar aasaaniyaaN hoN, zindagii dushwaar ho jaaye!!!**
AsGHar Husain ‘AsGhar’ GonDvii**
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
nice!!
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
***Tujhe Mohabbat Karni Nahi Aati
Mujhe Mohabbat ke sive Kuch Nahi Aata..
Zindagi guzarne ke Do hi raste hain Ghalib
Aik Tujhe Nahi aata aik mujhe nahi aata…!!***
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
Jo hairaan hain tmhare zabt pe keh do Qateel unse..
Jo seene pr nahi girta wo ansu dil pr girta hai.
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
Mirza ghalib never said such a whaheeYat shair …
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I agree, aaj kal loog beghair tahkeek kiyay ghalib ya faraz laga detay hain…or chacha ki rooh almay balaa may tarap uthti hai…
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
shair kis lehaz se whaheeyat hai ? thori si roshni dalni pasnad farmayee gay..
2nd thing i read it somewhere, liked it so posted it, if u want to know the source let me know.
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
waheeYat ayse hai k wazaN se gira hova shair hai - Ghalib jaysa shair ayse galti nahii karsakTa …
or zindagii guzarne k tareeqay hote haiN - rasTay nahii ![]()
Yes i would like to know the source - tell me the complete ghazal - plus the nuksa of dewan-e-Ghalib in which it could be found ![]()
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
koi aur ghalib b to ho sakta hai ![]()
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
Ishiii baat ka tu roNa hai k koi or ghalib nahii hosakta
wo ek hi tah jo urdu shairi pe Ghalib tah …hai or rehayGa
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Sarmad its not Ghalib’s shair, but contain a beautiful khayal. Agar iss shair ki teesri line se ghalib nikal diya jae to sari lines kafi had tak wazan main ajaengi.
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Heard this in Amjad Islam Amjad’s Drama Fishaar. I then thought it might be Amjad Islam Amjad’s own poetry.
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**nahiiN…AsGhar kaa hii hai aur is she’r kii ek history hai aur vo yeh k…jab log unkii jawaaN saal beTii ke intiqaal par ta’ziyat karne aaye to aapne do she’r paRhe…ba’d meN donoN ash’aar ko Ghazal meN tabdeel kar diyaa:
1.
chalaa jaataa huN haNstaa kheltaa mauj-e-Hawaadis se
agar aasaaniyaan hoN, zindagii dushwaar ho jaaye
aur
2.
aalaam-e-rozgaar ko aasaaN banaa diyaa
jo Gham huaa use Gham-e-jaanaaN banaa diyaa
donoN GhazleN bhii mulaaHizah farmaa leN:**
**nazar vo hai k jo kaun o makaN ke paar ho jaaye
magar jab rooH-e-taabaaN par paRe be_kaar ho jaaye
nazar us Husn par Thahre to aaKhir kis taraH Thahre
kabhii jo phool ban jaaye kabhii ruKhsaar ho jaaye
chala jaata huuN haNstaa kheltaa mauj-e-Hawaadis se
agar aasaaniyaaN hoN, zindagii dushwaar ho jaaye!!!
aalaam-e-rozgaar ko aasaaN banaa diyaa
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KKF thanks for the information, never knew that Jagjit Singh also sung that ghazal. BTW, aap ki taraf ek explanation udhar hai.
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Ghalib as takhalus har koi use kar sakta hai u koi koi aetraz hai?
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haan ji bilkul aitaraz hai
…aap sari dunia k samnay gobhi ko gulab ka takalus day k dekhain ;)…phir may bhi yehi sawal pochon ga or logo ki nazron may chupi hasi aap ko bhi nazar ayee gi
…jo zahiri baat hai aap ki baat pay unhain aaa rahi ho gi…![]()
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mein aap se ham-kalam nai hoon ![]()
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
hoyeeyay ga bhi nahi… ![]()
may chacha ka die heart fan hoon is liyay khud say ho gaya…
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
baat sahi hai ya ghalat … lekin insan kisi mashoor banday ka takhalus hi lagata hai
naam rakhnay se insan wuh nahi hojata…
ab apney naam ke saath iss type ke takhalus laga kar shairi karein to ‘’ machera’’ ‘‘pappu’’ ‘‘paai pheroo’’ ![]()
Re: Kaho dil ki baat sher ke saath
**چہرے سجے سجے ھیں تو دل ھیں بجھے بجھے
ہر**** شخص میں تضاد ھے دن رات کی طرح **