Kahin Tum Apni qismat Ka Likha Tabdeel Kar Letay

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

enter10 July 4, 2012, 12:39pm 1

**Kahin Tum Apni qismat Ka Likha Tabdeel Kar Letay
To Shayed Hum Bhi Apna Rasta Tabdeel Kar Letay

Agar Hum Waqiaa Kam Hoslaa Hotay Muhabbat Mein
Marz Bharne Se Pehlay Dawa Tabdeel Kar Letay

Tumharay Sath Chalne Per Jo Dil Raazi Nahin Hota
Bohat Pehlay Hum Apna Faisala Tabdeel Kar Letay

Tumhari Tarah Jeenay Ka Hunar Aata to Phir Shayed
Makaan Apna wohi Rakhtay Pata Tabdeel Kar Letay

Judaai Bhi Na Hoti Zindagi Bhi Sahal Ho Jati
Jo Ek Dusray Se Masla Tabdeel Kar Letay

Bohat Dundlaa Geya Hai Yaadoon Ki Rim Jhim Mein Dil Saada
Woh Mil Jata To Hum Bhi Aaina Tabdeel Kar Letay**

LP July 4, 2012, 12:45pm 2

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Bohat Dundlaa Geya Hai Yaadoon Ki Rim Jhim Mein Dil Saada
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Explain the poetic meaning of this line plz

enter10 July 4, 2012, 12:52pm 3

Re: Kahin Tum Apni qismat Ka Likha Tabdeel Kar Letay

Mera jany ka time ho gaya hy......
Bro aany waly hon gay,
Wo Aapko bata dyn gay....:)

muqawwee123 July 4, 2012, 12:55pm 4

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Tumhari Tarah Jeenay Ka Hunar Aata to Phir Shayed
Makaan Apna wohi Rakhtay Pata Tabdeel Kar Letay

Why this reminds me SRK of KKHH ’ Ghar badal diya tha, rishte to nahi badle the’

muqawwee123 July 4, 2012, 12:56pm 5

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Aap wo gana sun len.. Dil khoya khoya gum sum.. yadon main kisi ki gum

LP July 4, 2012, 1:07pm 6

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gaana sunna zaroori hai

muqawwee123 July 4, 2012, 1:08pm 7

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shair samajhna zaroori hai

LP July 4, 2012, 1:09pm 8

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MOD hoon…samajhna zaroori hai

muqawwee123 July 4, 2012, 1:16pm 9

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Chalo phir ye samajh len ke jab kisi ki yaad main insaan mubtala ho to baqi sab dhundla jata hai.. kuch yaad nahin rehta

LP July 4, 2012, 1:29pm 10

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Thank you :D

enter10 July 4, 2012, 3:07pm 11

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thanx bro

jiia July 4, 2012, 5:55pm 12

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kia qismat ka likha badalta hi:eek:
usi per sabar shakar rehna chahiay kion k k vo usne aap k laiy likha hota hi
jo aap se apki maa se bhi zada chata hi

ajazali July 4, 2012, 6:55pm 13

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ap MOD ho aapko samhana chaheay,
ap jaisa teacher hota hai aik, ossay question karen to wo ulta student se ossi question ka answer mang laita hai
“Tum btao na zara na-layqe pahr k nahi atay ghar se ”

mrayyazee July 5, 2012, 5:19am 14

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MOD ka be , hamray Leadroan jaisaa haal hy

enter10 July 5, 2012, 9:26am 15

Re: Kahin Tum Apni qismat Ka Likha Tabdeel Kar Letay

g bilkul sahi kaha