kahin qabool-e-dua ho sakti hai

bheegiyaad · January 18, 2008, 12:57pm

Fareeshta nahee, ghalati hum say ho sakti hai
Zindah houn Aaj, par kal mout ho sakti hai
Qasoor nahee mera, keh mehsoos nahee kuch
Dard ko najanay aur kiya dard ho sakti hai
Akalay may jo hum safar par chal diye youn…
Maloom thaa kiya subha may shaam ho sakti hai
Maanglo ubb phir jo maangna hai appnay rabb say tasha…
Waqt ki kiya khabr, kaheen qabool-e-dua’ ho sakti hai

deadsoul · January 18, 2008, 1:07pm

Re: kahin qabool-e-dua ho sakti hai

ahaaan
zabardast

babri · January 18, 2008, 1:11pm

Re: kahin qabool-e-dua ho sakti hai

BY you are rocking.
Really nice.
MUjh bohat achi lagi ye poem.
thanks for sharing.
:k:

Daanie · January 18, 2008, 1:19pm

Re: kahin qabool-e-dua ho sakti hai

buhut khoob :)

Sheal · January 18, 2008, 1:22pm

Re: kahin qabool-e-dua ho sakti hai

nice bheegi :)

bheegiyaad · January 18, 2008, 4:56pm

Re: kahin qabool-e-dua ho sakti hai

thanx eve 1

redidentity · January 18, 2008, 5:22pm

Re: kahin qabool-e-dua ho sakti hai

very nice :)

NikamiJano · January 19, 2008, 3:07am

Re: kahin qabool-e-dua ho sakti hai

nice sharing bhegiyaad :)

bheegiyaad · January 20, 2008, 12:52pm

Re: kahin qabool-e-dua ho sakti hai

thanx red n nikammi

Jhanjharewali · January 20, 2008, 1:04pm

Re: kahin qabool-e-dua ho sakti hai

**wah ji....BY...aap to chha gayeen hein :)

**

bheegiyaad · January 20, 2008, 1:06pm

Re: kahin qabool-e-dua ho sakti hai

kis par
P.S thanx JW