~ Kahin Aansuon Sey MiTaa Hua, Kahin Aansuon Sey Likha Hua ~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

system January 26, 2005, 5:47pm 1

***Woh thakaa hua meri baahon mein zara so gaya tha to kya hua
Abhi mainey dekha hai chaand bhi kisi shaakh-e-gul pe jhuka hua

Jisey le gayi hai abhi hawa woh varq tha dil ki kitaab ka
Kahin aansuon ne miTaa hua kahin aansuon ne likhaa hua

Kayi miil rait ko kaat kar koi mauj phool khilaa gayi
Koi paiR pyaas se maR raha hai nahi ke khaRaa hua

Mujhey haadson se sajaa sajaa key bahut haseen bana diya
Mera dil bhi jaisey dulhan ka haath ho mehndiyon se racha hua

Vahi khat ke jis pe jagah jagah do mehektey honthon ke chaand they
Kisi bhoole-bisrey sey taaq par taah-e-gard hoga daba hua

Vahi sheher hai vahi raastey vahi ghar hai aur vahi lawn bhi
Mager us dareechey sey poochna woh darakht anaar ka kya hua

Mere saath jugnoo hai humsafar mager is sharar ki bisaat kya
Yeh chiraagh koi chiraag hai na jala hua na bujha hua**

by Bashir Badr*

Shab-e-Hijar January 27, 2005, 1:05am 2

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bohat khoob :k:

Aryaan January 27, 2005, 1:31am 3

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very nice..

ghazal_kisi_ke January 27, 2005, 2:49am 4

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one of my favs .. .. thanx for sharing … ..

Zakhmi_Umar January 27, 2005, 6:03am 5

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Bohat khoob :k:

thanx for sharing

per itna sad sad keon ho jeee

Saqi_the_angel January 27, 2005, 10:09am 6

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Ajji, yeh subay subay Khamosh Nigahein kiyouN bol pariN. Bhaut hee Khoob. Share karney ka shukriya.

Tahir

reet January 27, 2005, 10:10am 7

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Jisey le gayi hai abhi hawa woh varq tha dil ki kitaab ka
Kahin aansuon ne miTaa hua kahin aansuon ne likhaa hua

nice and thnx 4 sharing…

system January 27, 2005, 8:30pm 8

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Sab-e-Hijar, Aryaan, ghazal kisi ki, Umar, Tahir & reet.. Thank you so much for liking :-)

Tahir jee... Kehtey hain to in nigahon ko khamoshi ki chilmanon mein phirsey chupa doon :-)

Saqi_the_angel January 27, 2005, 9:49pm 9

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NahiN janab u r not allowed to nigahon ko khamoshi ki chilmanon mein phirsey chupa doon

na baba nah

Humari tau du’aa hai aap chand ki tarah chamkati raheiN aur woh be 24hrs a day 7 days a week 365 days a year.

Tahir

Koyal January 28, 2005, 10:46pm 10

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v nice one of my most fav and most fav shaier... ki..thanks for sharin it again KN...:)

sokoon January 29, 2005, 12:39am 11

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^^^

Very nice, app tou yaqenun bouhat bari shaeir hein----wah wah

system January 30, 2005, 6:11pm 12

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Sinner January 30, 2005, 6:33pm 13

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wow .. nice :k:

Amal January 30, 2005, 7:35pm 14

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Beautiful ghazal and selection KhamoshNigahein…but looks like kuch aashaar meiN alfaaz aagey peechey aur kuch kami-beshi ho gai hey…Anyway, thanx for sharing with us

system January 30, 2005, 11:01pm 15

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Thank you Sinne and Amal :-)

Amal, feel free to correct me wherever I might be wrong :-)

NikamiJano January 31, 2005, 4:44am 16

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:k:

system February 7, 2005, 11:27am 17

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Thank You NikamiJano :-)