KahaN Say KahaN Tak

KahaN Say KahaN Tak

Meri Umr bhar rahi yeh aarzoo
Meray khwaab zameeN par utaraiN kabhi
MaiN tarap tarap kar reh gayaa
Meru aarzoo bus aarzoo hi rahi

Tweel raat hai dard ki
Jo sehar ko kabhi na pa saki
YahaN kadam kadam milay haadsay
Zakhm jinkay khudi na dikhaa saki

Yeh zehar zehar si udaasiayaN
Meray jism-o-jaaN main samaaN gayeeN
Yeh lab-b-lab tanhaayiaN
Mujhay kayaa say kayaa banaa gayeeN

Woh khalwataiN jo kabhi azeez theeN
Woh chaahataiN jo kabhi kareeb theeN
Woh khalwataiN ab dushman
Woh chaahataiN ab jalaawatan

Ghum ki chalee hai aaNdiaN
Dard ki is raat main
Yaas ki larzaiN bijliaN
FugaaN bhi liayay saath main

Daykar har kadam nashtar Na kar itnaa majboor mujhay
Laut kar phir aa na sakooN
Na kar itnaa ab door mujhay

Sitam aur teray shayud uthaa na paauN maiN
Khud say hi kahiN ab na uktaa jaauN main


Re: KahaN Say KahaN Tak

Tweel raat hai dard ki
Jo sehar ko kabhi na pa saki
YahaN kadam kadam milay haadsay
Zakhm jinkay khudi na dikhaa saki
Wah brijinder kmal hy.

Re: KahaN Say KahaN Tak

very very nice…:k:

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Thanx a ton,to both of u,for your warm words of appreciation.If a poem manages to touch some deep chord in the reader’s hear or is able to give a new perspective then it is its own “Haasil”-its own reward.
There are many so-called sentries of the potry who tell me that i should rather stop composing poetry as it does not adhere to the mutually accepted form of expression.I beleive that there will be as amany new forms of expression as there are people.Each has to adhere to the certain prinicples of aesthetics but those are not necessarily just the vazn behr only.Poetry is much more than the matmaticallly precise arrangement of words.
If left to them,i am sure they will put very many azzd nazms of the very established poets like Kaifi,Faiz,Parvin Shaikr etc just becuase those donot adhere to vazan n behr.

Thanx once again
Brijinder"Sagar"

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Re: KahaN Say KahaN Tak

Koi bat nahi yeh tu hamara farz tha itni brhiya shairi prhny ky bad dad na dyn aziadti thi. B ji:)

Re: KahaN Say KahaN Tak

Brijinder sahab saari nazm hi khoobsoorat hey, lekin ye quoted part to bohat hi zabardast hey :k: Thanx a lot for sharing it with us :slight_smile:

Re: KahaN Say KahaN Tak

Yeh zehar zehar si udaasiayaN
Meray jism-o-jaaN main samaaN gayeeN
Yeh lab-b-lab tanhaayiaN
Mujhay kayaa say kayaa banaa gayeeN

***Biluk sach hy:lajawab: ***

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I am very thankful to all of u for the kind words.

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Sharmindd :clown: krty hain bar bar Thankful ho kr Brijinder ji

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I am honoured to have found readers who like serious poetry,who can distinguish between a mushy poem n psuchologically mature poem.So naturally I should be thankful

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:blush: :clown: Ab tu or ziada sharmind akr diya oron ka tu pat anahi mera hal hy ky baz oqat serious sy serious poem pr perodi sojh jati hy Sorry in advance if it happens 2 u 2 in future:slight_smile:

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I too have a great sense of humour.Rather some friends say that I have a wacky sense of humour but what i meant by serious poetry was which is psychologically n emotionally mature poetry.
Thanx once again