kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

[Koyal]

***kaha sathi koi dukh dard ka tayar karNa hai jawab aya ye dar'yaa akeley par karNa hai

kaha rasta baksha hai na hamwar kion mujh ko
jawab aya tujhey har rasta hamwar karna hay

kaha kyon sam’ne chamka dia itna bara soraj
jawab aya humaiN saya pas-e-dewar karna hai

kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey
jawab aya mohabbat ka tujhey izhaar karna hai

kaha maiN ladla tera hoon maiN mitti main kyoN utron?
jawab aya k sab ko ye samander par karna hai***

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

:aq: farhat ki hai to udhar kyu post nahi ki

[Samad]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

*koyal ye par kar muje kuch kuch sa hone laga hai

dil dharak sa raha hai..bayqaboo ho raha hai...*

[Koyal]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

@Shab-e-Hijar

:aq: farhat ki hai to udhar kyu post nahi ki

adeem hashmi ki hai :halo:

[Koyal]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

@Arnold Shalwar Nicker

koyal ye par kar muje kuch kuch sa hone laga hai

dil dharak sa raha hai..bayqaboo ho raha hai...

korameen lay lijiay ya thada thanda roh afza lay lijiaye inshAllah Afaaqa ho gha :)

[SJ]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

@Koyal

***kaha sathi koi dukh dard ka tayar karNa hai*** ***jawab aya ye dar'yaa akeley par karNa hai*** ***kaha rasta baksha hai na hamwar kion mujh ko*** ***jawab aya tujhey har rasta hamwar karna hay*** ***kaha kyon sam'ne chamka dia itna bara soraj*** ***jawab aya humaiN saya pas-e-dewar karna hai*** ***kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey*** ***jawab aya mohabbat ka tujhey izhaar karna hai*** ***kaha maiN ladla tera hoon maiN mitti main kyoN utron?*** ***jawab aya k sab ko ye samander par karna hai***

Awesome Sharing Sis..............:)

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

@Koyal

adeem hashmi ki hai :halo:

copy cat poet

[SunnyBoy]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

:k:

[muncho]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

@Koyal

***kaha sathi koi dukh dard ka tayar karNa hai jawab aya ye dar'yaa akeley par karNa hai

kaha rasta baksha hai na hamwar kion mujh ko jawab aya tujhey har rasta hamwar karna hay

kaha kyon sam'ne chamka dia itna bara soraj jawab aya humaiN saya pas-e-dewar karna hai

kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey jawab aya mohabbat ka tujhey izhaar karna hai

kaha maiN ladla tera hoon maiN mitti main kyoN utron? jawab aya k sab ko ye samander par karna hai***

array bhaee ye kis k darmiyaan makaalma ho raha haiga? aur akhree shair main mitte aur samandar ka kia taaluq g?

[Koyal]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

array bhaee ye kis k darmiyaan makaalma ho raha haiga? aur akhree shair main mitte aur samandar ka kia taaluq g?

ye mitti aur samnadar ki apasi baat hia ap ki samj main nahi anay ki :p

[Prince_Ali]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

nice

[Dushwari]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

koyal,
it sounds spirtual, no?
can you please explain the metaphor in this poetry.
thanks,

Dushwari

[arsalanh2000]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

Good Poem, but zara si dagmagati hoyi hay, lolz.

Dushwari is rigth, Metaphore need to be explain ???

[redidentity]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

One of my favourites.. Adeem Hashmi ki book Faslay Aise Bhi Hongay se.. if em not wrong :$

Beautiful.. :)

[deep_ocean]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

Buhat Khoob Koyal :k:

[tahreem_saeed]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

baeutiful sharing sis

[Koyal]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

baeutiful sharing sis

.

thanks :)

[sunny_nicky]

Re: kaha lafzoN say phooloN ki mehak aney lagi kaisey

niceee