kaghaz pay shaam kaat k phir shaam likh de'ya

Koyal · March 27, 2011, 6:32pm

***baRson k inatazaaR ka anjaam likh de’ya
kaghaz pay shaam kaat k phir shaam likh de’ya

bikhRi paRee thi toot k kali’yaan zameeN paR
taRteeb day k main ne teRa naam likh de’ya

Allah zindagi say kab tak nibha’on maiN
kis bewafa k saath meRa naam likh dia

taqseem ho rahi theeN khud’ai ki naimataiN
ik ishq bach gaya so maiRay naam likh dia

Qaisar kissi ki dain hai ye shaiRee meRi
kis ki ghazal pay kis nay meRa naam likh de’ya***

Amal · March 27, 2011, 7:37pm

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Lovely sheir :k:

MeiN ney kabhi kisi ghazal meiN kisi aek qaafye ko itni baar repeat hote huwey nahi deikha. Pata nahi Qaisar sahab ney aesa kiuN kia

Innocent_Smile · March 27, 2011, 7:44pm

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beautiful ghazal…:k:

Aryaan · March 28, 2011, 7:02pm

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Good One Koyal..:)

Koyal · March 29, 2011, 2:03am

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thanks Aryaan :)

Koyal · March 29, 2011, 2:03am

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thanks Smile

Koyal · March 29, 2011, 2:04am

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keon k wo qaiser sahib haiN ne is leay QASRAT se sab use kaRtey

pktun · March 29, 2011, 4:55am

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Awsome

waleedhbk · March 29, 2011, 10:50am

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khawabRung · March 29, 2011, 5:29pm

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very nice poetry Koyal G............

UZ · March 29, 2011, 5:31pm

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Nice one :k:

ShabeTanhai · March 29, 2011, 9:02pm

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hmmmm nice

Heiress1 · March 30, 2011, 6:52pm

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nice

Koyal · April 5, 2011, 10:04pm

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thanks khawab rang :)

ehsan · April 6, 2011, 6:18am

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Nice. :k:

muddii · April 6, 2011, 10:36am

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Great Choice:) Pur Kis Nay Likha Tha Kaat Kay Naam?

waleedhbk · April 6, 2011, 12:11pm

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Faris_Udeen · April 6, 2011, 1:10pm

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Bohat haseen shayree…

Simii · April 6, 2011, 4:51pm

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awesome

Sannan · April 7, 2011, 5:27am

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nice one