" Kabootar " --- Ek Nazm Apni Qaum K Liye

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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" Kabootar "
Kaan khule hain
Aankhein band hain
Tu sab kuchh sunta hai lekin
Apni marzi par chalta hai
So main bhi jo jo kehta hoon
Wo bhi sun le !
**
Lekin jaani ! baat to tab hai
Jab tu sun kar
Maan bhi le k
**Waqt ki billi
Teri jaanib
Dheere dheere reeng rahi hai… !!!
(poet: Zamil)
[RIGHT](written in 2000)[/RIGHT]

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Re: " Kabootar " --- Ek Nazm Apni Qaum K Liye

waqt ki bilii ZAAAAMIL ur goin well from the very begining (2000) keep goin man :)

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Re: " Kabootar " — Ek Nazm Apni Qaum K Liye

mashAllah bouhat khoob… :k:

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Re: " Kabootar " — Ek Nazm Apni Qaum K Liye

Bohat khoob akkaasi ki hey aap ney qaom ki haalat-e-zaar ki :k: Thanx for sharing it with us Zamil :slight_smile:

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Re: " Kabootar " --- Ek Nazm Apni Qaum K Liye

Very nice:-)

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Pretty good. Azaad nazams are fun to read.

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Re: " Kabootar " — Ek Nazm Apni Qaum K Liye

BiengLonely, AsSweetAs, Amal, Gul-e-Tasbeeh, Aasif !!!

**Aap sab ka bohat bohat shukria…:slight_smile: **
**Nawaazish Hai Aapki…:blush: **

Every 1111 th poster WINS.....
Every 1111 th poster WINS.....
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Re: " Kabootar " --- Ek Nazm Apni Qaum K Liye

Buhat acha kaha hai Zamil,,,

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qalum main nishtar ki chubhan hay. Allah karay zoreqalam or ziyada.

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Boht khoob... :)

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NiCe!

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Sara, Shahana, HeArT HaCKeR, Azaan !!!!

*Pasandeedgi ka bohat shukria...:) *

Aadaab...

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zamil mera naam kahan hi main nay tareef ki thi :(

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Zara neeche bhi dekh lena tha Uncle B L .....!!!