kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,

ehsan · February 22, 2011, 11:29am

kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,
sitam ik naya har roz wo ijad karta tha,

ik mudat hoi kabi milne wo nahi aya,
jo panchi har roz mere name per azaad karta tha.

fara · February 22, 2011, 12:06pm

Re: kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,

Hmm panchi muk gayee hongay!! i like the first shair

Amal · February 22, 2011, 12:52pm

Re: kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,

ehsan bhai bohat khoobsoorat qat’a hey k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 22, 2011, 3:14pm

Re: kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,

2nd wala kuch yuuN hai...

*Zamana ho gaya lekin khabar lenay nahiN aaya...?
Jo Panchi roz meray naam pe aazaad karta tha...! *

ehsan · February 22, 2011, 3:27pm

Re: kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,

Thank you.

KKF · February 22, 2011, 3:48pm

Re: kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,

**bahot Khoob magar dusra misr'a kuchh yuN hai:

kabhii aabaad kartaa thaa kabhii barbaad kartaa thaa
sitam har roz hii vo ik nayaa iijaad kartaa thaa**

UZ · February 22, 2011, 5:20pm

Re: kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,

Very nice qitta Ebhai :k:

Faris_Udeen · February 22, 2011, 7:39pm

Re: kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,

Bohat achaa sher hain

Shab-e-Hijar · February 23, 2011, 7:05am

Re: kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,

bohat khoob EB :)

Aryaan · February 23, 2011, 1:38pm

Re: kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,

Bohat Khoob Ehsan Bhai..:k:

Koyal · February 24, 2011, 2:56am

Re: kabi abad karta tha kabi barbad karta tha,

boha khoon wesay me ye post kaRnay he lagi the shukaR hia dekh le ap ne post kia waRna LOGO ne kahna tha abhi kal he tu paRhi :p