kabhii yun b ho .....

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 1, 2011, 2:25pm

my very own ghazal… i wr0te it 2 years backk
baray logo se approve kerne k baad i m here to share it with you people

kabhii yun b ho k tum merii mohabbat kii kahanii likho
jo bahaaye tumhare firaaQ mein, un ashko`N kii rawanii likho

na simat saka sheher-e-dil, merii lutt gaii mata-e-hayaat
hoii ik yahan Qayamat bar-pa, merii bey-sarr-o-saamaani likho

mera durd-e-dil na sambhal saka k terii yaado`N ki chingaaryoN se
dil sulagta raha, jaan nikaltii rahii, thehR gaya aankh mei paani, likho

tum ne tu kaha tha laut0`N ga, hum duniya apnii basayieN ge
tujhe waada apna bhool gaya, ye baat hoii puranii, likho

tera haath jo choota mere hum-safar, kaheen kho gayee merii rah-guzaR
nhe katt sakayy ga ab tanha safaR, merii raaho`N mein hai weeranii, likhoo !!!

Amal · February 1, 2011, 2:31pm

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which celebrity do different members remind you of

my very own ghazal… i wr0te it 2 years backk
baray logo se approve kerne k baad i m here to share it with you people

kabhii yun b ho k tum merii mohabbat kii kahanii likho
jo bahaaye tumhare firaaQ mein, un ashko`N kii rawanii likho

na simat saka sheher-e-dil, merii lutt gaii mata-e-hayaat
hoii ik yahan Qayamat bar-pa, merii bey-sarr-o-saamaani likho

mera durd-e-dil na sambhal saka k terii yaado`N ki chingaaryoN se
dil sulagta raha, jaan nikaltii rahii, thehR gaya aankh mei paani, likho

tum ne tu kaha tha laut0`N ga, hum duniya apnii basayieN ge
tujhe waada apna bhool gaya, ye baat hoii puranii, likho

tera haath jo choota mere hum-safar, kaheen kho gayee merii rah-guzaR
nhe katt sakayy ga ab tanha safaR, merii raaho`N mein hai weeranii, likhoo !!!

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HH** bohat umda ghazal hey … maqta khaas tor par bohat khoob kaha aap ney :k: … baqi aashaar bhi umda heiN…jahaaN tak mujhey yaad parrta hey, ye aap ki pehli ghazal hey GS par. Right? Thanx for sharing it with us

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 1, 2011, 2:43pm

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thanks alot Amal for liking it…
g … ye merii GS pe pehlii ghazal haii … is se pehle kabhi himat nhe parri na kuch share kerne kii …

_Masoom_Muskaan · February 2, 2011, 7:02am

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^ Amal bhai konsa hath me danda le ke beteh hue

v nice poem btw

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 2, 2011, 2:59pm

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thanks MM :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 2, 2011, 3:32pm

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rhythm buhat acha hay HH, PaRhney meiN Lutf aaya...keep it up :-)

Shazia_Arif · February 2, 2011, 3:59pm

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bohat alaa heart hacker...aik or ache sha-ir ka izafa ho gaya:)

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 2, 2011, 4:41pm

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thanks for liking Gul and Shazia . .. ..

rabika · February 5, 2011, 9:04pm

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amazingly beautiful!

Koyal · February 7, 2011, 3:06am

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Beautiful gazal HH jeep it up :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 10, 2011, 6:51am

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:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 11, 2011, 5:03pm

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thanks alot rabika :)

Koyal thank y0uuu :)

ghazal :(

NihalK · February 11, 2011, 6:04pm

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Lovely!
When can we read your next Gazal???

IS · February 13, 2011, 12:15pm

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Very Nice HH :-)
and keep it up

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 14, 2011, 4:26am

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Kia hoa?

Golden_Scorpion_1 · February 23, 2011, 5:27am

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HH Dear... Keep it up.. :)

Very Nice..

Aryaan · March 27, 2011, 12:04am

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Bohat Khoob HeArT HaCKeR..:k:

Innocent_Smile · March 27, 2011, 9:29am

Re: kabhii yun b ho …

which celebrity do different members remind you of

my very own ghazal… i wr0te it 2 years backk
baray logo se approve kerne k baad i m here to share it with you people

kabhii yun b ho k tum merii mohabbat kii kahanii likho
jo bahaaye tumhare firaaQ mein, un ashko`N kii rawanii likho

na simat saka sheher-e-dil, merii lutt gaii mata-e-hayaat
hoii ik yahan Qayamat bar-pa, merii bey-sarr-o-saamaani likho

mera durd-e-dil na sambhal saka k terii yaado`N ki chingaaryoN se
dil sulagta raha, jaan nikaltii rahii, thehR gaya aankh mei paani, likho

tum ne tu kaha tha laut0`N ga, hum duniya apnii basayieN ge
tujhe waada apna bhool gaya, ye baat hoii puranii, likho

tera haath jo choota mere hum-safar, kaheen kho gayee merii rah-guzaR
nhe katt sakayy ga ab tanha safaR, merii raaho`N mein hai weeranii, likhoo !!!

boht achi ghazal hai HH…aur idea bhi boht acha hai. :k:
aur Poetry forum main

Koyal · March 27, 2011, 10:23pm

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achi koshish HH :k: