KABHI...

[Shazia_Arif]

kabhi jo meri jholi main
sitare kuch simat ain
main in ko bant k sab main
inhain anmol ker dun gi
kabhi tara kabhi jugnoo
kabhi roshni ka manba hoon
angara si meri sochain
sholon ka ik palanda hun
mujhe shohrat se kya lena
nhi kuch kaam dolat se
na tum baqi na main fani
na tum qulzam na main pani
main khushion ki tamanai
ye dil kashkol ker dun gi
kabhi jo meri jholi main
sitare kuch simat ain
main un ko bant k sab main
unhain anmol ker dun gi…

[Sannan]

Re: KABHI…

Simply Awesome :lajwab: Aaj aap key kalaam mein kuch taswaf key jhalak bhi nazar aai hay , shabash keep it up :cobra:
*** intiahi serious comment par aapnay aap ko shabash daing *****

[Shazia_Arif]

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@Sannan

Simply Awesome :lajwab: Aaj aap key kalaam mein kuch taswaf key jhalak bhi nazar aai hay , shabash keep it up :cobra:
*** intiahi serious comment par aapnay aap ko shabash daing *****

kis ki jhalak

[Miyan_jee]

Re: KABHI...

Great Great Great Great one aap k liye TaliyaN!

[jiia]

Re: KABHI…

sach batanaa kahan se CHURAYA yi jumla

@Sannan

Simply Awesome :lajwab: Aaj aap key kalaam mein kuch taswaf key jhalak bhi nazar aai hay , shabash keep it up :cobra:
*** intiahi serious comment par aapnay aap ko shabash daing *****

[deadsoul]

Re: KABHI...

bht khubsorat aghaaz kia ap nay nazm ka

bt ye line " na tum baqi na main fani"

fani to pori dunya hai
share karnay ka shukrya

[Shazia_Arif]

Re: KABHI...

Great Great Great Great one aap k liye TaliyaN!

m honoured g.

[Shazia_Arif]

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@deadsoul

bht khubsorat aghaaz kia ap nay nazm ka

bt ye line " na tum baqi na main fani"

fani to pori dunya hai share karnay ka shukrya

ahan ye to mene socha e nai tha...well thank u 4 pointing out the mistake :)

[saadat_tahir]

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kabhi jo meri jholi main sitare kuch simat ain main un ko bant k sab main unhain anmol ker dun gi...

bohat khoubsoorat...taleeeyann...ajee wah!

thanx for sharing...very well written and conceived...indeed....!

:)

sat

[Sannan]

Re: KABHI…

@Shazia_Arif

kis ki jhalak

tasawuf

@jiia

sach batanaa kahan se CHURAYA yi jumla

ghalti say mairay munh say nikkal gia

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: KABHI…

very nice i really like it

[Shazia_Arif]

Re: KABHI...

bohat khoubsoorat...taleeeyann...ajee wah!

thanx for sharing...very well written and conceived...indeed....!

:)

sat

its being honoured to have your fabulous comments.

[Shazia_Arif]

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@Sannan

tasawuf

bas ker dain ustad-e-mohtaram,aik aam si bandi k kalam ko abda parveen se rala dia :hinna:

[Shazia_Arif]

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@_Masoom_Muskaan

very nice i really like it

main sadkay ro k kerra like hota hai

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: KABHI…

@Shazia_Arif

main sadkay ro k kerra like hota hai

kerra ka kia matlab hoing

[Shazia_Arif]

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@_Masoom_Muskaan

kerra ka kia matlab hoing

oh sorry i 4got that every one is not punjabi…it means titlion ka ghar

[Amal]

Re: KABHI…

@Shazia_Arif

kabhi jo meri jholi main
sitare kuch simat ain
main in ko bant k sab main
inhain anmol ker dun gi
kabhi tara kabhi jugnoo
kabhi roshni ka manba hoon
angara si meri sochain
sholon ka ik palanda hun
mujhe shohrat se kya lena
nhi kuch kaam dolat se
na tum baqi na main fani
na tum qulzam na main pani
main khushion ki tamanai
ye dil kashkol ker dun gi
kabhi jo meri jholi main
sitare kuch simat ain
main un ko bant k sab main
unhain anmol ker dun gi…

Marvelous

[Sannan]

Re: KABHI…

@Shazia_Arif

bas ker dain ustad-e-mohtaram,aik aam si bandi k kalam ko abda parveen se rala dia :hinna:

Shukar karo Shakal naheen milla di

[Shazia_Arif]

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@Amal

Marvelous

thanx g.

[Shazia_Arif]

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@Sannan

Shukar karo Shakal naheen milla di

to wo b mila do,wese b koi khas faraq nai