kabhi....

Jaan_Lewaa · January 18, 2004, 6:44pm

kabhi ki hogi suraj ne chand se mohabbat
tabhi to chand me daagh hai
mumkin hai k chand se hui hogi bewafai
tabhi to suraj mai aag hai

Xeus · January 18, 2004, 7:25pm

Xabarbast!!! bohat achay…:k:

Jaan_Lewaa · January 18, 2004, 7:27pm

shukriya

Sehar · January 18, 2004, 8:27pm

very good :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · January 18, 2004, 10:55pm

thanx

cuteepie · January 19, 2004, 12:34am

wah :k:

BaDsHaH_ho_Mein · January 19, 2004, 1:30am

nice

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 19, 2004, 1:52am

Waoo! :k: :k:

keep it up Jaan Lewaa:flower1:

Azad · January 19, 2004, 5:08am

humm

AQ · January 19, 2004, 5:20am

Re: kabhi....

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Jaan Lewaa: *
kabhi ki hogi suraj ne chand se mohabbat
tabhi to chand me daagh hai
mumkin hai k chand se hui hogi bewafai
tabhi to suraj mai aag hai
[/QUOTE]
:~) two shairs oxymorons of each other :~)

Daagh-e-Mehtaab yaqeenan abb chaand say bhee HaseeN hai ;~)

nikii · January 19, 2004, 7:47am

Re: kabhi....

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Jaan Lewaa: *
kabhi ki hogi suraj ne chand se mohabbat
tabhi to chand me daagh hai
mumkin hai k chand se hui hogi bewafai
tabhi to suraj mai aag hai
[/QUOTE]

bhut differnt sa shair ha :-)

Jaan_Lewaa · January 20, 2004, 12:57am

thanx all

chodhry · January 20, 2004, 4:29am

Heyyyy Its just zabardast, kia ferq sooch hey jinaab, I love :love: this kinda poetry.
keep it up :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · January 21, 2004, 12:55pm

thanx:)