Kabhi yuun bhi toh ho

ehsan · March 29, 2007, 6:31pm

Kabhi yuun bhi toh ho
dariya kaa saahil ho
purey chaand kee raat ho
aur tum aao

kabhi yuun bhi toh ho
pariyon kee mahafil ho
koi tumhaari baat ho
aur tum aao

kabhi yuun bhi toh ho
yeh narm mulaayam Thandee havaayein
jab ghar se tumhaare guzarein
tumhaari Khushbu churaayein
mere ghar le aayein

kabhi yuun bhi toh ho
suuni har manzil ho
koi na mere saath ho
aur tum aao

kabhi yuun bhi toh ho
ye baadal aisaa Toot ke barsey
mere dil kee tarah milney koh
tumharaa dil bhi tarase
tum nikalo ghar se

**kabhi yuun bhi toh ho **
**tanahaai ho, dil ho **
**buundein ho, barasaat ho **
**aur tum aao **

kabhi yuun bhi toh ho

fghd · March 29, 2007, 6:36pm

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kabhi yuun bhi toh ho
suuni har manzil ho
koi na mere saath ho
aur tum aao
:love:

wah wah Ehsan bhai kiyaaaaaaaaaaaaa piece nikala hai …
abb mai kiya kahon

Shab-e-Hijar · March 29, 2007, 6:38pm

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Nice poem :)

Krypton · March 29, 2007, 6:44pm

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omg one poem in poetry forum i cud actually read, understand, and its good :D

fghd · March 29, 2007, 6:51pm

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Honestly, I REALLY liked it!
Its simple and yet deep ..
I loved it! :k:

ehsan · March 29, 2007, 6:54pm

Re: Kabhi yuun bhi toh ho

Kabhi yuun bhi toh ho
Mein poetry mein thread kholon
aur sub ayyein
lekin please tum NA aao

Kabhi yuun bhi toh ho.

fghd · March 29, 2007, 7:00pm

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^ jaisey aap ki poem didnt come true wiasey hi this wish wont come true either

AQ · March 29, 2007, 8:09pm

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saahil par poora chaand tau saheeh baat naheeN hai.. madd-o-jazar aa jaataY haiN... uss ko bulaa kar jawaar bhaaTay kaY hawaalaY karnaY kaa iraadah hai kiyaa? :P

P_G · March 29, 2007, 8:20pm

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nice one

waysay jub idher Bijli chalee jatee hay to aisee nazmai perh perh ker hee light ko wapas bulatay hain : D

AQ · March 29, 2007, 8:22pm

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hum tau woh waali paRhtaY thaY

Ranjish hee saheeh, dil ko behlaanay kaY liye… Aaaaaa
AAaa, phir saY mujhay choR kaY jaanaY kaY liye Aaaaaaaaaaa

moonmine · March 29, 2007, 9:02pm

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good one!

P_G · March 30, 2007, 6:05am

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ab yeh manter kaam nahi kerta na : D

SJ · March 30, 2007, 11:35am

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very beautiful "nazam"
thanx for sharing!!!!!!!!!
:)

NikamiJano · March 30, 2007, 8:17pm

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hay kia nazam hai me tu idher he hoti ehsan g lakin ap ko EMM se fursat milay tab na :(

IS · March 31, 2007, 3:50pm

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**kcuh arsa pehlay jab mai nay post ke thi ro kesi nay reply nai kiya **
aaj achanak sab ko itni achi lagnay lag gaie

**one of my fav poem **
**thanks for sharing ehsan bahi **
wesay aaj kal aap kuch zaida he poetry nai parhnaty lag gaiay hain

ehsan · March 31, 2007, 3:58pm

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Imran sahib yeh apni apni kismat hai.

Waisay partay toh bauhat dair say hain, lekin post aab karni shuru kee hai.

redroses · March 31, 2007, 4:04pm

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kabhi yuun bhi toh ho
ye baadal aisaa Toot ke barsey
mere dil kee tarah milney koh
tumharaa dil bhi tarase
tum nikalo ghar se

kabhi yuun bhi toh ho
tanahaai ho, dil ho
buundein ho, barasaat ho
aur tum aao
kaash

bahot hi zaberdast :k::k:

nakhan · March 31, 2007, 4:11pm

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^ okay wait till next baarish

Nice one ehsaan bhai

redroses · March 31, 2007, 4:12pm

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poora saal waite keroon ab kia :(

nakhan · March 31, 2007, 4:22pm

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^ nahi is week main phir hogi... tum fikar na karoo