kabhi tum na samnay aa sakay kabhi mujh pay gaRd paRi rahi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal January 19, 2011, 4:54pm 1

maiN tumhaRay aks ki aaRzoo meiN bass aa’yina hi bani rahi
kabhi tum na samnay aa sakay kabhi mujh pay gaRd paRi rahi

wo ajeeb shaam thi aaj tak meRay dil meiN uss ka malal hai
*meRi taRha jo teri muntaziR teRay rastay meiN khaRi rahi *

kabi waqf-e-hijR maiN ho ga’ee kabi khwab-e-wasl meiN kho ga’ee
maiN faqeeR-e-ishq bani rahi maiN aseeR-e-yaad huwi rahi
**
huwi uss say jab meRi baat b thi shaReek-e-daRrd wo zaat b
tu na janay koN si cheez ki meRi zindgi meiN kami rahi

KKF January 19, 2011, 5:04pm 2

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bahot aalaa Ghazal pesh kii hai...mujhe is Ghazal kii bahr bahot pasand hai...is men baRii naGhmagii hai...maiN ne to ise gungunaa kar paRhaa hai...bahot lutf aayaa :) shukria share karne ke liye :)

deadsoul January 19, 2011, 5:45pm 3

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buhat khob

_Masoom_Muskaan January 19, 2011, 6:08pm 4

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v nice koyal jeee :)

Shab-e-Hijar January 19, 2011, 7:12pm 5

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Nice.

Koyal January 19, 2011, 7:36pm 6

Re: kabhi tum na samnay aa sakay kabhi mujh pay gaRd paRi rahi

tu gungna kaR hamin b suna deejey na :) hum b dekhain fakhta kesay bolta :p

KKF January 19, 2011, 7:38pm 7

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hahaha...ab agar sunaa diyaa to log be_hosh ho jaayeNge...vaise, iskii tarz maiN en bahooot paali paali shii banaayii hai :) dekhna merii si tarz pe kisi din koi baRaa singer sie gaayegaa :) haha...sachchii! :D**

UZ January 19, 2011, 8:38pm 8

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Nice one koyal :k:

KKF ab gunguna hi do ham bhi sun lein gay yaa to royein gay yaa bhaag jaayein gay awaz sun ker

ehsan January 19, 2011, 8:43pm 9

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very nice. :k:

Aryaan January 19, 2011, 11:38pm 10

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Bohat Khoob Koyal..:)

Amarbail January 20, 2011, 5:55am 11

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Heart touching … :k:

KKF January 20, 2011, 5:59am 12

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**
haN jii, aap royeN rahguzaar pe hazaar baar koi aapko uThaaye kiuN?

maiN soch rahaa huN k kiuN na ham log kisi din chatroom meN mushaa’ira kareN?**

Shazia_Arif January 20, 2011, 6:00am 13

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i agree with Amerbail...really heart touching.

UZ January 20, 2011, 6:22am 14

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Mushairaa :D haan ho to sakta hai magar mein sher kahaan se laoon gi :D

UZ January 20, 2011, 6:22am 15

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Mushairaa :D haan ho to sakta hai magar mein sher kahaan se laoon gi :D

KKF January 20, 2011, 6:29am 16

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jangal se aur kahan se? jangal se pakaR ke laaiyegaa 10 fooT kaa :) zinda sher vo bhii 10 fooTaa :)**

UZ January 20, 2011, 6:31am 17

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Haan magar mujhe sher miley bhi to mein achi shikaran nahi

KKF January 20, 2011, 6:33am 18

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hmmm…use kuchh khilaa pilaa ke le aaiyegaa…na khaaye piye to rishwat de dijiiyegaa aur agar phir bhi na maane to kah dijiyegaa zardari aanewaalaa hai tujhe pakaR ke le jaayegaa…tab aa jaayegaa :)**

UZ January 20, 2011, 6:42am 19

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Zardaari ko to awaam bhi jootay maarti hai ;)

KKF January 20, 2011, 7:00am 20

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haN to sher bhii maaregaa na lol ;)