Kabhi nazrain milanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

dil_ki_awaz April 28, 2010, 6:11am 1

**Kabhi nazrain milanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein
Kabhi nazrain churanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

Kisi ki aankh khulti hai tou wo bhi sonay ki nagri mein
Kisi ko ghar bananay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

Kabhi ghar say nikaltay hi nazar aa jati hai manzil
Kabhi manzil ko panay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

Jinhain hum bhool jatay hein wo kyun ker yaad aatay hein
Unhain phir say bhulanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

Kabhi ik pal brabar bun k sadian beet jatay hein
Kabhi ik pal bitanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein!**

Sannan April 28, 2010, 6:19am 2

Re: Kabhi nazrain milanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

**abhi ik pal brabar bun k sadian beet jatay hein
Kabhi ik pal bitanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein!

buaht khoubsurat kalam banta (share) kia aap nay
**

dil_ki_awaz April 28, 2010, 6:26am 3

Re: Kabhi nazrain milanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

sukaria

terray_naam May 1, 2010, 7:44am 4

Re: Kabhi nazrain milanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

very nice

Amal May 2, 2010, 4:56pm 5

Re: Kabhi nazrain milanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

Achi ghazal hey, thanks for sharing :)

P_G May 2, 2010, 5:21pm 6

Re: Kabhi nazrain milanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

wow zabardast ...

Daanie May 3, 2010, 3:53am 7

Re: Kabhi nazrain milanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

buhut khoob ji :)

babri May 3, 2010, 9:38am 8

Re: Kabhi nazrain milanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

Bohat Khoob choice :k:

punjabi_kuri_1 May 3, 2010, 9:40am 9

Re: Kabhi nazrain milanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

wowwwwwwwwwww

Boredman May 3, 2010, 10:07am 10

Re: Kabhi nazrain milanay mein zamanay beet jatay hein

Awesome :) i really enjoyed the flow of words thanx for posting it :)