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Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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beautiful stuff.

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wats wrong with "karti raho".
well everyone is laughing plz do tell me why???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
my urdu mite be weak so do tell me

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Miss Nice: *
wats wrong with "karti raho".
well everyone is laughing plz do tell me why???????
my urdu mite be weak so do tell me
[/QUOTE]

Dear miss nice nothing wrong with "karti raho" but "karti raho larki k leay use hota na is leay sab samj rahay..k ap Amal ko larki samj rehi is leay wo tu laarki nahi hian na.......tu isi leay sab Amal ko tang kar rahya..wesay ap unhiN larki samj rehi thei ya phir ???

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Nice and catchy like always :k: Good stuff you got there Amal :k: :k: :k:

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oopsie daisey am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry i really thought that u were a girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sorry again

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*fiza ke laboN pe ab bhi rawaaN heiN, teri saari qasmeiN, terey saarey waadey
mujhey kya pata tha terey baad hum’dum, hawaeiN terey lafz dohraya kareiN gi

khaab har dikhaya magar ye na bataaya, ke kya loat kar tu aa bhi sakey ga
kabhi jo muraadoN ki pareshaN duwaaeiN, tujhey do gharri ko bulaaya kareiN gi
*

Amal Jee…
bohat Ghehraai se likhaa haye aap ne.
its marvelous…:k:

thank you so much for sharing it with us. :flower1:

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Asalam o laikum

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Wa Alykum Assalaam & Welcome to Gupshup:)

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nice

rerally nice and touche