kabhi mujh ko saath lekar, kabhi mere saath chal kar

Zakhmi_Umar · September 21, 2004, 12:33pm

kabhi mujh ko saath lekar, kabhi mere saath chal kar
vo badal gaye achaanak meri zindagi badal kar

huye jis pe meharabaa.N tum koi Khush_nasiib hogaa
meri hasarate.n to nikali.n mere aa.Nsuuo.n me.n Dhal ke

terii zulf-o-ruKh ke qurbaa.N dil-e-zaar Dhuu.NDhataa hai
vahii champa_ii ujaale vahii surama_ii dhu.ndalake

ko_ii phuul ban gayaa hai ko_ii chaa.Nd ko_ii taaraa
jo chiraaG bujh gaye hai.n terii a.njuman me.n jal ke

mere dosto Khudaaraa mere saath tum bhii Dhuu.NDo
vo yahii.n kahii.n chhupe hai.n mere Gam kaa ruKh badal ke

terii bejhijhak ha.Nsii se na kisii kaa dil ho mailaa
ye nagar hai aa_iino.n kaa yahaa.N saa.Ns le sambhal ke

koiDost · September 21, 2004, 1:49pm

Verry Nice :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 21, 2004, 3:48pm

luv this ghazal.. thx for sharin :)

Zakhmi_Umar · September 22, 2004, 5:44am

thanx koi dost :)

thanx HH :)

reet · September 24, 2004, 11:36am

kabhi mujh ko saath lekar, kabhi mere saath chal kar
vo badal gaye achaanak meri zindagi badal kar

:k::k::k:

Nayab · September 24, 2004, 1:04pm

bohot khoob :)

Zakhmi_Umar · September 25, 2004, 5:19am

thanx reet

Zakhmi_Umar · September 25, 2004, 5:20am

thanx Nayab

ASA · September 25, 2004, 6:34am

terii bejhijhak ha.Nsii se na kisii kaa dil ho mailaa
ye nagar hai aa_iino.n kaa yahaa.N saa.Ns le sambhal ke

wah… very nice umer… :k:

Zakhmi_Umar · September 26, 2004, 9:59am

thanx sweetoo

Diva · September 26, 2004, 3:00pm

Bohat Khoob *thumbs UP *

Zakhmi_Umar · September 27, 2004, 5:29am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Diva: *
Bohat Khoob *thumbs UP *
[/QUOTE]

thanx Diva :)

Saqi_the_angel · September 28, 2004, 12:39am

Re: kabhi mujh ko saath lekar, kabhi mere saath chal kar

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Zakhmi Umar: *
kabhi mujh ko saath lekar, kabhi mere saath chal kar
vo badal gaye achaanak meri zindagi badal kar

huye jis pe meharabaa.N tum koi Khush_nasiib hogaa
meri hasarate.n to nikali.n mere aa.Nsuuo.n me.n Dhal ke

terii bejhijhak ha.Nsii se na kisii kaa dil ho mailaa
ye nagar hai aa_iino.n kaa yahaa.N saa.Ns le sambhal ke
[/QUOTE]

ZU Ji,

Bhaut Khoob, Sahib yeh aksar hota ke koi aap ki zindgi kar markz o mehver bananay ke b'aad achanak hi aap ki zindgi se ghaib ho jata hai.

Kisi sha'air ne kiya khoob kaha hai:

yeh ishq nahiN aasaaN, bas itna samjh lihiyeh
aag ka darya hai aur doob ke jana hai

Saqi

Zakhmi_Umar · September 28, 2004, 5:33am

Re: Re: kabhi mujh ko saath lekar, kabhi mere saath chal kar

thanx saqi

bilkul aisa hi hota hai

nice sher thanx for sharing :k: