jimmi
1
badi ajeeb lagti hey apni daastan kabhi kabi
dil apna bhi ho jata hey preshaan kabhi kabi
ho tu jaate hein hamari khushi mein woh shamil magar
zehr lagti he unko hamari muskaan kabhi kabhi
socha tha nah rakhein ge ab koi taalluq unse magar
chala hi jata hey unki tarf hamara dhyian kabhi kabhi
tod kar dil sadgi se muskara diya karte hein hamesha
hote hein apne kiye pe woh magar paisheman kabhi kabi
Maslehton ne humein bana rakha hay apna ghulam jimmi
todna pad jata hey kiya hoa apna ehdo peimaan kabhi kabhi
AQ
2
Re: kabhi kabhi
This is good stuff...
just for the last sher, as much as the thought and idea is good, I feel it loses the wazan - lenght wise it feels a bit longer?
jimmi
4
Re: kabhi kabhi
This is good stuff...
just for the last sher, as much as the thought and idea is good, I feel it loses the wazan - lenght wise it feels a bit longer?
aap theek farma rahe hein please tasih kar dein aap thnx
Re: kabhi kabhi
Cool jehra boly oho ai kunda khooly: Anno farmaiy na tasih:wink:
Re: kabhi kabhi
jimmi hata to sahi hosakta wazan 
vnice :k: keep sharing good stuff with us 
