kabhi kabhi thorri ziyada ho jati hay

Azad · June 4, 2003, 10:55pm

Yeh tairGi adat nahi naseeb hay Warna
Hum to her waqt dil e Azad~ jalay rakhain

Dhaik Azad~ humain zindagi nay haar dia
Woh zindagi jisay hum nay bohut sa pyar dia

Yeh sub taray ashna hain palkon kay Azad~
Palay yeh aankh main kehkashaan say pehlay

Ujarr gay Azad~, Kehtay hain JunooN kay hatoon
Unhain kia maloom Hum nay shehar abaad rakha

Adab Arz
(Azad)

Paglee · June 5, 2003, 2:19am

hmmm achi hia

ghazal_kisi_ke · June 5, 2003, 2:51am

OKEY SO what can i do:p

Azad · June 5, 2003, 7:54am

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*Originally posted by Paglee: *
hmmm achi hia
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Paglee say ziyada kon jaan sakta hay :) ^thanks for ur comments

Azad · June 5, 2003, 7:55am

kanjoos oor kuch nahi to jappi hi pa lay

Dilsay · June 5, 2003, 8:02am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
OKEY SO what can i do:p
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Azad did you ask her to do anything....

Azad · June 5, 2003, 8:07am

humm pata nahi

Zakhmi_Umar · June 5, 2003, 8:49am

Re: kabhi kabhi thorri ziyada ho jati hay

Wah Re Wah Anne Wah, Buhat khooooooooooooob :k:

Azad sb achi shairee kar lete hien aap

Zakhmi_Umar · June 5, 2003, 8:51am

jee jee bilkul jappi pao :k: piyar bhare ga

system · June 5, 2003, 6:38pm

boaht khoob, :k::k:

achey shaair hain…

ghazal_kisi_ke · June 5, 2003, 7:26pm

tum se mujhe yeh umeed nahi thee:(
tum mera sath denay ke bajay uska sath kion day rahay hi:(
aur haan** piyar** nahi** doste**

Azad did i ask dilsay to interfere between me and you:hoonh:

excuse me:snooty:
u should know ur limits buddy:smash:

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 5, 2003, 8:13pm

GKK sis calm down

PS nice :k: azad jee

Dilsay · June 5, 2003, 8:16pm

ohh… but if you have that much ego thn please keep in mind this is a poetry forum if you have to do this all you must goto to cafe… i hope you both will understand this all… good luck

Dilsay · June 5, 2003, 8:17pm

if you still feel like i am interfaring thn i am sorry....

ghazal_kisi_ke · June 5, 2003, 10:35pm

o ho i was just jokking around:D
i’m not serious at all:kiss:

ghazal_kisi_ke · June 5, 2003, 10:40pm

okey so u think in poetry we can’t joke around:hoonh: but excuse me i don’t think so.and yes u plz keep this thing in mind that i don’t need to know from u that what shouold i do and what should i not.i’ll do whatever i want .got it or do u still need more explanations. and yes for ur other message my reply is u should mind ur own business.i was talking wiht azad not wiht u and plz do i favour to me don’t say sorry after doing something unexceptable.

Zakhmi_Umar · June 6, 2003, 4:53am

oh sorry mujhe aap ka saath dena chahye bilkul sahi Azad sb apni limits mien raho bhai , aur haan piyar matlab dosti hi hai, dekho piyar ho ga tu dosti ho gi na

Zakhmi_Umar · June 6, 2003, 4:55am

ooooooooOOOOOOOOOOooooooooOOOOOOOO
liya lecture diya hai woh bhi english mien khooooooob

ghazal_kisi_ke · June 6, 2003, 6:00pm

english emin ho yah urdu mein mujhe jo kehna tha mein ne keh diya:)
i don’t get one thing y ppl interfer too much in other ppl’s problems:disgust:

yeh hoe na dosto wale baat:D
piyar matlab doste:bummer: right:halo:
u mean piyar dosto wala:p

Dilsay · June 6, 2003, 7:03pm

i have a reply to each and every word you have said… but forget it… and this is my last reply to you anyway