kabhi aa'smaaN ki bulandi'ooN se utar k khaak pe aa'eiN gaiN

Koyal · September 10, 2007, 3:06am

*koi hal na koi jawab hai ye sawal kesa sawal hai
** j**isay bhol jaNay ka hukam hai usay bhol jaNa mu’hal hai

hu’eeN zard phooloN ki basti’aN magar is maiN teri khta kahaN
tujhay log dil se duaa’eyN daiN yehi teray jiN ka kamal hai

kabhi aa’smaaN ki bulandi’ooN se utar k khaak pe aa’eiN gaiN
abhi punchi’oon ko kahbar nahi ye zameeN walooN ka jaal hai

isi neem k pay’er ki oO’t maiN abhi chaand haar k so gay’aa
teray paak hoontoN ko choom lay ya kahan kisi ki majal hai

isi aik bister-e-behasi pe thakay thakay se badaN milay
teray saath b wohi be-dili ye visaal kesa visaal hai
*

Dushwari · September 10, 2007, 3:22am

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koyal,
thanks for sharing.
3rd sheire speaks & is very resonant.
nice thoughts.

Dushwari

Shab-e-Hijar · September 10, 2007, 3:37am

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akhir 2 shair

Koyal · September 10, 2007, 11:08am

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thanks :)

deep_ocean · September 10, 2007, 11:33am

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Nice :k:

thanks for sharing

being_lonely · September 10, 2007, 11:47am

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koyal jee thumbs up for ur sharing

Jhanjharewali · September 10, 2007, 1:10pm

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another beauty!

Amal · September 10, 2007, 1:43pm

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Koyal bohat hi khoobsoorat ghazal hey…great selection :k: … Thanx for sharing it with us

WiseGuy · September 10, 2007, 1:58pm

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Nice... thank you for sharing.

AQ · September 10, 2007, 5:09pm

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khoob...

andaz Amjad Islam Amjad kaa lagtaa hai.... kiya yeh AIA kee hee hai? :) please, let me know :)

Koyal · September 11, 2007, 2:31am

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^ nahi Amjad islam ki nahi basir badar ki hia :)

AQ · September 11, 2007, 2:37am

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tau naam kiouN naheeN likhaa thaa agar pataa thaa tau…

Koyal · September 11, 2007, 2:46am

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bus aisay he suspense :)…bashir bdar is one of ma fav me un ki gazalin he zaida post karti AIA i like him too but books mostly i have bashir badar , mohsinnaqvi,aytbaar sajad

Prince_Ali · September 11, 2007, 4:14pm

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koi hal na koi jawab hai ye sawal kesa sawal hai
jisay bhol jaNay ka hukam hai usay bhol jaNa mu'hal hai

1st shair says all!
buhut khub :)

Koyal · September 12, 2007, 3:23am

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thanks :)

Koyal · September 12, 2007, 3:24am

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blush:

Koyal · September 12, 2007, 3:25am

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us main tu kisi ne ankhain nahi mari hwuei shaboo

K_Khan · September 12, 2007, 3:26am

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mamLA sangeen lagTA hai

kher

buhat khoob Ko ko..

Koyal · September 12, 2007, 3:26am

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thanks DO

Koyal · September 12, 2007, 3:27am

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thanks lonly g