kaat-ta hoon zindagii bhar mae ne jo booya nahi...

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 27, 2004, 2:50pm

***

Ghum ki baarish ne bhee tere zakhmo`N ko dhooya nahi
Tu ne mujh ko kho diya mae ne tujh ko khooya nahi

Neend ka halka sa gulabii khumaar ankho`N mien tha
Youn laga jaise wo shub ko dair tuk sooya nahi

Jaanta hoon aik aisay shaks ko mae bhee Muneer
Ghum se pather ho gaya lekin kabhi rooya nahi *

**

shoaib_akhter · June 27, 2004, 4:40pm

ahaan ahaan :k: :k:

system · June 27, 2004, 5:06pm

bohat khoob :k::k:

chand_chehra · June 27, 2004, 5:12pm

Nice :k:

Man_of_Courage · June 27, 2004, 5:48pm

[QUOTE]
Jurn aadam ne kia aur nasl-e-aadam ko saza
[/QUOTE]

I really hate such poetry which goes out of limits, just as the one quoted.

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 27, 2004, 6:14pm

thanks chanduu.. vivoo... shobby..

Koyal · June 28, 2004, 3:09am

:k:

cuteepie · June 28, 2004, 5:34am

very nice :k:

Azad · June 28, 2004, 7:20am

hummm

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 28, 2004, 10:28am

koyal cuteepie.. thanks

azad uncle hmm x 1000

momo02 · June 28, 2004, 12:27pm

very nice:)

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 28, 2004, 12:53pm

thanks momo..:)

Pramod · June 28, 2004, 2:49pm

Jurn aadam ne kia aur nasl-e-aadam ko saza
Kaat-ta hoon zindagii bhar mae ne jo booya nahi

Jaanta hoon aik aisay shaks ko mae bhee Muneer
Ghum se pather ho gaya lekin kabhi rooya nahi

Good one...*HeArT HaCKeR Sahiba *.
thanks for sharing this beatuiful piece...

Maheen2002 · June 28, 2004, 4:37pm

Nice

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 28, 2004, 5:28pm

thx for liking pramod bhaii

maheenuu: thanks

koiDost · June 28, 2004, 9:48pm

Bahut Khoob HH Jee :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 29, 2004, 8:41am

thanks dost jee.. :)

Daagh · June 29, 2004, 10:06am

nice one bachii

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 29, 2004, 10:08am

thankoo daagho uncle