~Kaash Mujhay Tanha Rahnay diya Hota~

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 9, 2002, 12:43pm

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Amal · October 9, 2002, 1:30pm

Re: ~Kaash Mujhay Tanha Rahnay diya Hota~

*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *
MaiN SitaaroN ko dekhti tou sochtii
Ke kitnay sundar haiN charagh roshniyoN ke
Jugnuu haiN bhakkay huwey jaesay bastiyoN ke
Ab tou sitaaroN kay maa’ni haiN badaL Rahay
ik khayal ke samundaR meiN jaesey
kanwaL Taer rahay haiN
Ab tou dekh kar un ko sochti huuN meiN
us ka milan bhii hay Ya !!
is hasti meiN duuriyoN ki jalan hi hay
…
Gar meiN tanhaa hoti
Tou Suraj dhaLnay ki saa’ton meiN
MeiN nay ye sochaa hotaa
Kay kirnoN ki dosti suud par thii ya zayaN par
Abhi aur kitnay khawaab haiN jahaN par
Magar ab tou dubtay Suraj kay saath jaesey
DiL bhi duub jataa hay meraa
Tanha hotii Gar jo meiN
Thandi meeThi sub-hoN meiN umeed-e-FasL-e-Gul hoti
Shabnami khawahishoN meiN
TitliyoN, parwa’oN ki halchal hotiii
Magar ab tou jaesey koi tuufaaN pehlay say hii
Mojazan hotaa hay paLkoN say paray
Khultay hii chashaM-e-beena
Tip tip barsanay Lagta hay
Aur subha ki be-Mehrii ka Nasha
Rag-o- pey meiN utarnay Lagta hay
Mujhey tanhaa rehnay diya hota tou
Koi Lamha kamzoR na hotaa
Koi jazba munh-zoR na hotaa
Jis Raah par Qadam partay
Wuhi manzaL ka raasta hota
Kaash tum ny
Mujhey tanha rehney diya hotaa
kaaaaash…!!!

Beautiful poem Gul:k:…thanx for sharing.

system · October 9, 2002, 3:02pm

:) wow

punjabi_kuri · October 9, 2002, 3:05pm

:k:

Rameesha · October 9, 2002, 3:49pm

Re: ~Kaash Mujhay Tanha Rahnay diya Hota~

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *
Ab tou haR Sam’ay Aankh pur-Nam hay
ik tasasalsul hay siskiyoN ka Rag-e-jaaN meiN *sigh
Aur uss par neeNd bhii kam hay
.
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Gar meiN tanhaa hoti
Tou Suraj dhaLnay ki saa'ton meiN
MeiN nay ye sochaa hotaa
Kay kirnoN ki dosti suud par thii ya zayaN par
Abhi aur kitnay khawaab haiN jahaN par
Magar ab tou dubtay Suraj kay saath jaesey
DiL bhi duub jataa hay meraa
Tanha hotii Gar jo meiN
Thandi meeThi sub-hoN meiN umeed-e-FasL-e-Gul hoti
Shabnami khawahishoN meiN
TitliyoN, parwa'oN ki halchal hotiii
Magar ab tou jaesey koi tuufaaN pehlay say hii
Mojazan hotaa hay paLkoN say paray sigh
Khultay hii chashaM-e-beena
Tip tip barsanay Lagta hay
Aur subha ki be-Mehrii ka Nasha
Rag-o- pey meiN utarnay Lagta hay
Mujhey tanhaa rehnay diya hota tou
Koi Lamha kamzoR na hotaa
Koi jazba munh-zoR na hotaa
Jis Raah par Qadam partay
Wuhi manzaL ka raasta hota
Kaash tum ny
Mujhey tanha rehney diya hotaa
kaaaaash..........!!!
[/QUOTE]

& more sighz:(

seedha dil pe attack kiya he Gul ... buhat khoobsorat nazm he

chand_chehra · October 9, 2002, 6:02pm

:k:

Sohaib · October 9, 2002, 6:38pm

hi kya post ker diya gul baji
bohut achi touching hai :k:

nikii · October 9, 2002, 8:03pm

very nice n touchy gul
:k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 10, 2002, 6:23am

mei nei isileiyei tumh kah tanha nahei rehnei diaya :p

gullllllllllllll bohot achei poetry heiiiiiiii mei nei toh pehlei bhei perh hie lei thie ;)

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 10, 2002, 6:25am

NikamiJano · October 10, 2002, 9:39am

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 11, 2002, 8:56am

^
ShukaR hay Bhai NahiN kah diyaa

Thanks a lot For your nice Comments Amal ji, punjabi kuri,Mem Sahib, Chanda, saby, nikii,masoom, NJ sis

Rameesha jii zeyada ZoR say tou nahiN na Lagi:) hugs

Nayab · October 11, 2002, 10:45am

Hmmm Bohot khoob:k:

MARRIED_NY · October 11, 2002, 3:53pm

wahh

bohat khub ghazal hai