Kaash Main Teray Bun-e-Gosh Main Bunda Hota..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity August 2, 2007, 4:13pm 1

Majeed Amjad Sahab Ki Wo Nazm Jis Ki Base Pe Wasi Shah Ne Aik Nazm Likh Ker Kaafi Maqbooliat Haasil Ki..

Kaash Main Teray Bun-e-Gosh Main Bunda* Hota

Raat Ko Be-Khabri Main Jo Machal Jaata Main
To Teray Kaan Se Chup Chaap Nikal Jaata Main
Subh Ko Girtay Teri Zulfon Se Jab Baasi Phool
Meray Kho Janay Pe Hota Tera Dil Kitna Malool
Tuu Mujhe Dhoondti Kis Shoq Se Ghabrahat Main
Apne Mehkay Huay Bister Ki Her Ek Silwat Main
Juunhi Kerti Teri Narm Ungliaan Mehsuus Mujhe
Milta Iss Gosh Ka Gosha-e-Manoos Mujhe
Kaan Se Tuu Mujhe Hergiz Na Utaara Kerti
Tuu Kabhi Mer Judaii Na Gawara Kerti
Yuun Teri Qurbat-e-Rangeen Ke Nashay Main Madhosh
Umrr Bhar Rehta Meri Jaan Main Tera Halqa-Bagosh

Kaash Main Teray Bun-e-Gosh Main Bunda Hota

Bunda* = Ear Ring

Umeed Hai Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

Amal August 2, 2007, 4:44pm 2

Re: Kaash Main Teray Bun-e-Gosh Main Bunda Hota..

Very nice Ahmer :k: Bohat umda tehreer hey

redidentity August 2, 2007, 4:48pm 3

Re: Kaash Main Teray Bun-e-Gosh Main Bunda Hota..

Thank Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu... :)

AQ August 2, 2007, 4:48pm 4

Re: Kaash Main Teray Bun-e-Gosh Main Bunda Hota..

ahaa… never knew that Wasi Zafar took the idea from this master piece ..

waisaY I took the idea from wasi zafar and wrote a poem too.. but if I post it here, Amal will warn me and I may be banned for pointing fingers at Administrator of this site…

uss kee pehli line share kartaa hooN, mazmooN aap loug khud bhaaNp laiN

Kaash maiN iss Forum kaa ik haseeN chaaploos hotaa

redidentity August 2, 2007, 4:50pm 5

Re: Kaash Main Teray Bun-e-Gosh Main Bunda Hota..

Lolx.. I never knew k aap nahi hain..

No Harsh Feelings..

(Ye sirf hug hai, kuch aur nahi)

SJ August 2, 2007, 4:54pm 6

Re: Kaash Main Teray Bun-e-Gosh Main Bunda Hota..

bohat khobsorat nazam hai Ahmer..................
:)

Prince_Ali August 2, 2007, 5:14pm 7

Re: Kaash Main Teray Bun-e-Gosh Main Bunda Hota..

very nice :k:

NikamiJano August 2, 2007, 5:28pm 8

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nice sharing :)

Shab-e-Hijar August 2, 2007, 5:40pm 9

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kafi romantic si hai :)

AQ August 2, 2007, 6:08pm 10

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abb tau pataa lag gayaa naa
abb mat bhooliye gaa

redidentity August 3, 2007, 5:06am 11

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Jee acha.. :halo:

redidentity August 3, 2007, 5:07am 12

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Thank You sonia Jee.. :)

redidentity August 3, 2007, 5:07am 13

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So to hai.. :D

redidentity August 3, 2007, 5:08am 14

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Thank You Nikami Jee.. :)

redidentity August 3, 2007, 5:09am 15

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Thnx..

being_lonely August 4, 2007, 11:46pm 16

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Kuch DIN PEHLE HE TO ISS PE BEHAS HUI THI MAJEED AMJAD WAS A REAL POET AUR WASI KA NAAM NA LIA KARO AHMER BHAI

redidentity August 5, 2007, 9:18am 17

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:)

babri August 5, 2007, 2:21pm 18

Re: Kaash Main Teray Bun-e-Gosh Main Bunda Hota..

Very nice

redidentity August 5, 2007, 2:37pm 19

Re: Kaash Main Teray Bun-e-Gosh Main Bunda Hota..

thank you sevenstar..