Kaanch ki Guria

Sheal · August 6, 2007, 12:31am

“Kanch Ki Guria”

Main ek kanch ki guria
Hawa-e-dehr ki zad main kabhi tooti kabhi bikhri

Main waqt ki aankh main thera hoa

Be rang sa aansoo

Keh jis ki manzilain zameen ki pehnayian thehri

Main aangan k dar-o-dewar pr thera

Ek khizaan zada mousam

Jisay koi dekhna chahay, na khwahish ho choonay ki

Main ek kanch ki guria

Main be rang sa aansoo

Main khizaan zada mousam

Mager ruko, suno, dekho

Main insan bhi to hoon

Meray ehsas k zakhmi badan ko narm lafzoon ka

Marham do

Meray be rang hathoon ko kabhi to koi rang day do

Mohobbat na sahi

Mager itna hi kr do tum

Faqt aitebar ka ek lazawal pal mujhay de do

AQ · August 6, 2007, 1:26am

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

kaaNch kee guRiyaa ko sanbhaaL kar rakhnaa chaahiye

thanks for sharing a good poem Sheal

aur abb, mera ususal sawaal, poet’s name please

Sheal · August 6, 2007, 1:28am

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

Thanks for liking AQ

:) or mera hamesha ki trha usual sa jawab :(. ab to ap ko pata chal jana chahiyay :(

Sheal · August 6, 2007, 1:30am

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

snbhalnay wala mil gaya to khud hi sanbhaal lay ga :D

decent_Felow · August 6, 2007, 1:30am

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

wow

nice sharin :)

Sheal · August 6, 2007, 1:31am

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

thanks decent :)

AQ · August 6, 2007, 1:37am

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

awww tau afsurdah honaY waali kiya baat hai?

maaloom karo aur mujhaY bhee bataao :p

Sheal · August 6, 2007, 1:46am

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

koshish kerti hoon lakin meri diary pakistan main hai ....

brb after namaz :)

redidentity · August 6, 2007, 4:33am

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

Very Sweet Poem.. :)

Sheal · August 6, 2007, 4:39am

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

Thank you Ahmer :)

Dushwari · August 6, 2007, 4:44am

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

Sheal, very nice poem.. it indicates a transparent sense of transaction of regard that is hear to come by.
are you writing them? :)
thanks for shairng.
Dushwari

Sheal · August 6, 2007, 4:45am

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

Thanks dushwari.
no i am not. its someone else :)

Prince_Ali · August 6, 2007, 3:35pm

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

buhut khub sheal :)

SJ · August 6, 2007, 4:15pm

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

Very Nice Poem Sheal :)

Amal · August 7, 2007, 2:27pm

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

Another nice piece Sheal :k: Thanx for sharing it with us

Shab-e-Hijar · August 7, 2007, 6:21pm

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

:hinna: suno mai insaan bhi :hinna:

very hi nice :k:

Sheal · August 7, 2007, 6:26pm

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

thankoooooo Amal and shab for liking:)

Sheal · November 14, 2007, 9:32pm

Re: Kaanch ki Guria

feel like sharing it again..........