Kaam Aa Sakeen Apni Vafaain Tu Kiya Kaarain....

muddii · May 16, 2008, 5:35am

Kaam Aa Sakeen Na Apni Vafaain Tu Kiya Kaarain
Ik Baywafa Ku Bhool Na Jaain Tu Kiya Kaarain

Mujh Ku Yeh Aaitiraaf Duaooun Main Hai Asar
Jaayen Na Arsh Pur Ju Duaayen Tu Kiya Kaarain

Ik Din Key Baat Hu Tu Ussay Bhool Jain Hum
Naazil Hun Rooz Dil Pay Baalain Tu Kiya Kaarain

Shab Bhar Tu Unn Key Yaad Main Taray Gina Kiay
Taray Say Din Ku Bhee Nazar Ayen Tu Kiya Kaarain

Ahed-e-Tarab Key Yaad Main Roya Kiye Buhat
Abh Moskora Kay Bhool Na Jain Tu Kiya Kaarain

Abh Jee Main hai keh Unn Ku Bhula Kar Hee Daikh Lain
Voh Baar Baar Yaad Ju Aaien Tu Kiya Kaarain

Tark-e-Wafa Bhee Jurm-e-Muhabat Sahii “Akhtar”
Millnay Laagain Vafa Key Sazayen Tu Kiya Karrain…

muddii · May 16, 2008, 6:08am

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Inni moskil say Akhtar Sherani key nazam talash key woh AQ kay qafiya radeef main ghum ho chalii thee:)

sara_farooqui · May 16, 2008, 6:36am

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" Mujh Ku Yeh Aaitiraaf Duaooun Main Hai Asar
Jaayen Na Arsh Pur Ju Duaayen Tu Kiya Kaarain "

**Buhat khoob Mudii ji,,,,,

muddii · May 16, 2008, 6:39am

Re: Kaam Aa Sakeen Apni Vafaain Tu Kiya Kaarain....

Thank u Sara:)

musk_with_khushi · May 16, 2008, 10:45am

Re: Kaam Aa Sakeen Apni Vafaain Tu Kiya Kaarain....

Abh Jee Main hai keh Unn Ku Bhula Kar Hee Daikh Lain
Voh Baar Baar Yaad Ju Aaien Tu Kiya Kaarain niceeeee oneeeeeee(

Tark-e-Wafa Bhee Jurm-e-Muhabat Sahii "Akhtar"
Millnay Laagain Vafa Key Sazayen Tu Kiya Karrain.....................umdaaaa onee

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 16, 2008, 10:53am

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muddii · May 16, 2008, 11:01am

Re: Kaam Aa Sakeen Apni Vafaain Tu Kiya Kaarain....

Thank u for liking my choice:)

muddii · May 16, 2008, 11:02am

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MusMus Kiya Howa? Kiya Poem Samjh Aa Gaiee?

Aryaan · May 16, 2008, 2:33pm

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Beautiful poem Muddii..:k:

muddii · May 16, 2008, 3:36pm

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Thank u Aryaan:)

Shab-e-Hijar · May 16, 2008, 6:31pm

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hahaha

Shab-e-Hijar · May 16, 2008, 6:32pm

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milnay lagay wafa ki sazain to kya karay … beautiful

S.786 · May 16, 2008, 8:18pm

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milti rahin wafa ki sazaien tu kiya karen...?good........:)

PuNjAbi_GaBrU · May 17, 2008, 4:30am

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Awesome..

muddii · May 17, 2008, 5:36am

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Thank u:)

muddii · May 17, 2008, 5:37am

Re: Kaam Aa Sakeen Apni Vafaain Tu Kiya Kaarain....

Thank u Safia:)

muddii · May 17, 2008, 5:38am

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Thank u:)

abeeha · May 17, 2008, 7:53am

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very gud collection

muddii · May 17, 2008, 9:34am

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Thank u Abeeha:)

Legacy · May 17, 2008, 9:39am

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nice