kaali kiran ye goo'nj sadaa'ooN k daa'erey

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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maana wo ik khawaab tha dhhoka nazar ka tha
uss bewafa se rabt magar umar bhar ka tha

khushbu ki chand mast lakeereN ubhhaar kar
lauTa udhhar hawa ka woh jhonka jidhhar ka tha

nikla woh baar baar ghataa’ooN ki oo’at se
uss se muamla to faqat ik nazar ka tha

tum muskra rahe thay tu shab saath saath thi
aansoo girey thay jis pe woh daaman sahar ka tha

ham aaj bhi khud apne hi saaye maiN ghir gaye
sar maiN hamaare aaj bhi sauda safar ka tha

sahra k sar ki maang hai ab tak wo ik lakeer
haasil jise gharoor meri rahguzar ka tha

kaali kiran ye goo’nj sadaa’ooN k daa’erey
pohancha kahaN (!) iraada kidhhar ka tha..!

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zabardast :k::k:

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Boht khoob..:k:

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hmmmm

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bohat khoob :k:

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Re: kaali kiran ye goo’nj sadaa’ooN k daa’erey

:slight_smile: very nice :flower2:

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:k:

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:k:

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pahocha kahan...iraada kahan ka tha

bahot khoob koyal jee :)

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Re: kaali kiran ye goo’nj sadaa’ooN k daa’erey

:slight_smile: wah wahhh. zabaerdast :k: thanks for sharing.

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hummm

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Daagh: *
*pahocha kahan...iraada kahan ka tha

bahot khoob koyal jee :)
[/QUOTE]

very nice koyal jee

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Chiknay ka naya nick Reet ... khoob

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Bahot hii pyaari ghazal hai ** Koyal **.
I once again appriciate your choice.
Thanks for sharing...

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
Chiknay ka naya nick Reet ... khoob
[/QUOTE]

Azad g, u r wrong,

aap kis chikney ki baat kar rahe hai, i don't know
but i m reet, a new member of this site.

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khoob Koyal jee.

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kon khoob hai koyal ya ghazal :konfused:

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thanks Viv

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thanks heatru..:slight_smile:

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by *~~BoReD-iN-BrIsBaNe~~: *
hmmmm
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hmmm tu asli Azad ap haiN....:D