k sumait kaR teRi kirchi'aaN

[NikamiJano]

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k paas-e-hajoom sitam garaN
abhi koN tuj se wafa karaY?
abhi kis ko fursatain is qadaR
k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN
teRay haq maiN khud se dua karaY!

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k tah gubaaR-e-gham-e-jahaN!
kahaN khoo gaye teRay chaara ghaR
k rah-e-hayat maiN raay’gaaN
kahaN so gaye teRay humsafaR

abhi ghum ghusarooN ki choat seh
abhi kuch na sun abhi kuch na kah

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN

*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k paas-e-hajoom sitam garaN
abhi koN tuj se wafa karaY?
abhi kis ko fursatain is qadaR
k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN
teRay haq maiN khud se dua karaY!

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k tah gubaaR-e-gham-e-jahaN!
kahaN khoo gaye teRay chaara ghaR
k rah-e-hayat maiN raay’gaaN
kahaN so gaye teRay humsafaR

abhi ghum ghusarooN ki choat seh
abhi kuch na sun abhi kuch na kah

very nice:k:

[arifnawaz1]

Beautiful :)

[Muddi]

Re: k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN

*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k paas-e-hajoom sitam garaN
abhi koN tuj se wafa karaY?
abhi kis ko fursatain is qadaR
k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN
teRay haq maiN khud se dua karaY!

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k tah gubaaR-e-gham-e-jahaN!
kahaN khoo gaye teRay chaara ghaR
k rah-e-hayat maiN raay’gaaN
kahaN so gaye teRay humsafaR

abhi ghum ghusarooN ki choat seh
abhi kuch na sun abhi kuch na kah

Inna Roona Kafi Hai? Ya Abhee Oor Rowoon

[Pramod]

bahot hi pyaari nazm hai, bahna.
eik azeeb sa dard hai magar dard ke bina zindagii ka maza bhi to nahin hai....
thanks a lot for sharing.

[chand_chehra]

Re: k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN

*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k paas-e-hajoom sitam garaN
abhi koN tuj se wafa karaY?
abhi kis ko fursatain is qadaR
k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN
teRay haq maiN khud se dua karaY!

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k tah gubaaR-e-gham-e-jahaN!
kahaN khoo gaye teRay chaara ghaR
k rah-e-hayat maiN raay’gaaN
kahaN so gaye teRay humsafaR

abhi ghum ghusarooN ki choat seh
abhi kuch na sun abhi kuch na kah

beautiiiiiiiiiful poem :k:

[Lamhay]

Re: k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN

*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k paas-e-hajoom sitam garaN
abhi koN tuj se wafa karaY?
abhi kis ko fursatain is qadaR
k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN
teRay haq maiN khud se dua karaY!

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k tah gubaaR-e-gham-e-jahaN!
kahaN khoo gaye teRay chaara ghaR
k rah-e-hayat maiN raay’gaaN
kahaN so gaye teRay humsafaR

abhi ghum ghusarooN ki choat seh
abhi kuch na sun abhi kuch na kah

oye nikami rotay nahin buri baat !!

bahut hi pyari ghazal hai thanks 4 sharing siso !

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

[NikamiJano]

Re: Re: k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN

*Originally posted by Muddi: *

Inna Roona Kafi Hai? Ya Abhee Oor Rowoon

alay alay ap keon roey..jo hum ne dastan apni sunaie…

meRi chashm-e-taR ka gham na kaR teRi zaat is ka sabab nahi
wo tu auR he koi baat thei meRay dil ko jis ka malal tha

keep smilling…

[NikamiJano]

Re: Re: k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN

*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

beautiiiiiiiiiful poem :k:

[NikamiJano]

Re: Re: k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN

*Originally posted by Lamhay: *

oye nikami rotay nahin buri baat !!

bahut hi pyari ghazal hai thanks 4 sharing siso !

ok ap kahti tu … now happy..thanks 4 liking…

[NikamiJano]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
bahot hi pyaari nazm hai, bahna.
eik azeeb sa dard hai magar dard ke bina zindagii ka maza bhi to nahin hai....
thanks a lot for sharing.
[/QUOTE]

Pra g jis main dara nahi wo gazal ya nazam nahi keon sahi kaha na :)
any way thanks and zara nawazi jo ap ko nikami k post ki huiwe har gazal aur nazam achi lagti.....:)

[NikamiJano]

*Originally posted by Masoom Muskaan: *

:nono: :french:

[NikamiJano]

thanks arif nawaz and gazal kisi ki :)

[ARSH]

abhi koN tuj se wafa karaY?
abhi kis ko fursatain is qadaR
k sumait kaR teRi kirchi'aaN
teRay haq maiN khud se dua karaY!

LOvely.............

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Re: k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN

*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k paas-e-hajoom sitam garaN
abhi koN tuj se wafa karaY?
abhi kis ko fursatain is qadaR
k sumait kaR teRi kirchi’aaN
teRay haq maiN khud se dua karaY!

abhi zid na kaR dil-e-bekhabaR
k tah gubaaR-e-gham-e-jahaN!
kahaN khoo gaye teRay chaara ghaR
k rah-e-hayat maiN raay’gaaN
kahaN so gaye teRay humsafaR

abhi ghum ghusarooN ki choat seh
abhi kuch na sun abhi kuch na kah :teary3:

Beautiful but sad one

http://www.jordysworld.de/emoticons/trau03.gif

[Jaan_Lewaa]

keep it up:K:

[Khushee]

WOW............ dis is just soooooooooooooooo amazing.... very nice..... do u know who is it by?.... its just great.... thanks for sharing :)

[MOSAN]

Verry nice jee!:(

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

:nono: :french: