k lahjay baraf ho jaa'eN tu phir pighla nahi kartey

Koyal · January 16, 2006, 8:04pm

***isay maiN ne he likha tha *** ***k lahjay baraf ho jaa'eiN*** ***tu phir pighla nahi kartey*** ***parinday dar k urr jaa'eiN *** ***tu phir loota nahi kartey*** ***isay maiN ne he likha tha*** ***yaqeeN uth jaa'ey tu sha'ed*** ***kabhi wapis nahi aata*** ***hawa'ooN ka koi toofaaN*** ***kabhi baarish nahi laata*** ***isay maiN he likha tha*** ***k sheesha toot jaa'ey tu *** ***kabhi phir jur nahi paata*** ***jo rastey se bhatak jaa'ey*** ***wo wapis mur nahi pata*** ***isay kahna wo bey-maani adhura khat*** ***usay maiN ne he likha tha*** ***usay kahna k dewanay*** ***mukamil khat nahi likhtey***

ASA · January 17, 2006, 4:28am

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wow… Awesome :k:

nakhan · January 17, 2006, 4:39am

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Bohot Umdah Koyal ji, heart touching

usay main nay hi likha tha
k bina shaair k naam ki Nazam
parh k bhi maza ata hay. lolz

do u know poet name?

system · January 17, 2006, 7:23am

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bohat khoob ...

ussay kehna dewanay
mukmal khat nahi likhay

zaberdast !

nakhan · January 18, 2006, 5:03am

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baar baar parh kar bhi maza aa raha hay

bohot hi achi hay
thanks again

Maheen2002 · January 18, 2006, 2:02pm

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Beautiful :-)

safeena · January 20, 2006, 3:12am

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Zabardasttt..!!

Noor_gr8 · January 20, 2006, 6:22pm

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[BOLD]i simple have just one word for it "zabardast"

Lukhnowi_nawab · January 21, 2006, 9:00am

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Buhat khoob,,,,,,,,,,

ullujii · January 22, 2006, 12:03am

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simply awesome

Amal · January 22, 2006, 2:19pm

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Back with a bang! Koyal bohat hi umda nazm hey, bohat maza aaya parrh kar, thanx for sharing it with us. Keep posting

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 24, 2006, 11:55am

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kewl …:k:

WiseGuy · January 24, 2006, 3:28pm

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Bohat khoob!
Thank you for sharing!

IS · January 25, 2006, 1:43am

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bEAutIFul

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 25, 2006, 11:40am

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Nice:-)

Shab-e-Hijar · January 25, 2006, 7:52pm

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beautiful :-)

Koyal · January 25, 2006, 10:39pm

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thanks sweeto

Koyal · January 25, 2006, 10:40pm

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sorry don't know poet name:(
but thanks for liking:)

Koyal · January 25, 2006, 10:41pm

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thanks:)

Koyal · January 25, 2006, 10:42pm

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Maheeno thanks:)