k baaRish jab bhi hoti hia tumhaiN he yaad kaRti hai

Koyal · March 19, 2011, 4:06am

suno tum loat aa’o na
jahaN tum ho wo dunia kab tumhaRi hai
k suRaj dhal gaya hai
auR haseen shaam utRi hai’
wo dekho chaand niqla hai sitaRay jagmaga’ey haiN
hamari muntizaR aa’nkhaiN dua’yeN manghti aa’nkahiN
tumhaiN he soochti aa’nkhaiN
tumhaiN he dhoondhti aa’nkhaiN
tumhaiN wapis bulati haiN
tumhaRa akas phiR sha’yed
meRi palkooN pe utRa hai
koi aansoo agaR aa’ya
baha k ab na lay jaa’ey
ye dil jab bhi dhaRakta hai
tumhaRa naam laita hai
ye aansoo jab bhi bahtey haiN
tumhaRay dukh maiN bahtey haiN
k baaRish jab bhi hoti hia
tumhaiN he yaad kaRti hai
khushi koi jo aa’ey tu
tumhaRey biN adhoRi hai
suno tum loat aa’o na

Amal · March 19, 2011, 6:12pm

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Kya baat hey Koyal Ji … I must say aap ka poem ka taste bohat develope huwa hey :k: … bohat achi nazm hey

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 19, 2011, 8:45pm

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umdahh sharing Koyal..

Shab-e-Hijar · March 19, 2011, 9:13pm

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wah bohat khoob :)

NOREEN19 · March 19, 2011, 10:23pm

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Awesome sharing

Koyal · March 20, 2011, 12:27pm

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thanks Amal

Koyal · March 20, 2011, 12:27pm

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thanks shabo g :) kahan rehti hain aj kal

Koyal · March 20, 2011, 12:28pm

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thanks Gul :)

pktun · March 21, 2011, 12:23pm

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Bht Umdah

Aryaan · March 21, 2011, 4:54pm

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Beautiful Sharing Koyal..:k: