Tum Bohot Paas Aa Rahay Ho
Tum Bohot Door Jana Chahtey Ho Kya
Jis Se Milney Ka Wada Kiya Tha
Us Se Bichar Kar Aa Gai Ho Kya
Manzil Se Itna Door Bhag Rahey Ho
Manzil Pe Tumhara Koi Nahi Hai Kya
Dushmano Se Kis Tawaqu Pe Maang Rahey Ho
Dosto Ne Ajj Tak Kuch Dia Hai Kya
Is Mehfil Mein Koi Apna Nahi Hai
Is Mehfil Main Sabhi Apne Hain Kya
Kisi Pe Ilzam Kyun Nahi Dete
Tumhi Ne Ujara Tha Khud Ko Kya
Judai Bhi Kitne Ehsaan Se Aai Hai
“Zahid” !!! Khud Mangi Thi Khuda Se Kya
23rd July, 2008
SinlneR
Re: --= Judai =--
Thanx abeeha jee..
hope this time i was fine with rhythm too. !!!
Re: --= Judai =--
*Jis Se Milney Ka Wada Kiya Tha
Us Se Bichar Kar Aa Gai Ho Kya
*
Gud Work dude
abeeha
7
Thanx abeeha jee..
hope this time i was fine with rhythm too. !!!
ABSOLUTELY ......rhythm is too gud.
rabiee
8
Re: --= Judai =--
puri ki puri buhat achi hai. Awesome :)
rabiee
9
Re: --= Judai =--
puri ki puri buhat achi hai. Awesome :) keep it up
*Jis Se Milney Ka Wada Kiya Tha
Us Se Bichar Kar Aa Gai Ho Kya
*
Gud Work dude
Thanx bro !!!
ABSOLUTELY ......rhythm is too gud.
Ohh. thank u soo much..
puri ki puri buhat achi hai. Awesome :) keep it up
ahem ahem.. shukriyah jee.. for appreciating my work..
FANTASTIC WORDS
thanx dear . . .
rabiee
12
Re: --= Judai =--
ab agar itni achi poetry ho gi to appreciate to karna hi pare ga na
Re: --= Judai =--
Ab app humein itna bhi asmaan mein mat uraiye..
rabiee
14
Re: --= Judai =--
per pehle wali "inetzar" ziyada achi thi
Re: --= Judai =--
kyun.. wht was so good in tht?
rabiee
16
Re: --= Judai =--
us mein maza ziyada tha. . .ye b achi hai per tat was gud