juda jab ho jaoun to mari yaad main roya mat karna
har waqat k jagna oor dair say soya mat karna
younhi sotay main agar zikar ho jaye mara
khawab palkoon pay maray piroya mat karna
ho dil betab jab mujeh say milnay ko
piyar ki is judae main khud ko behal mata karna
hamain to har haal main jeena hay younhi tanha
tum apni zindagi banana hargiz mara intizar mat karna
nakhan
October 27, 2005, 5:51pm
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Achi hay, kiya tum nay khudh likhi hay? :p
Sukriya aap nay bata diya warna hamian bhi tanha hi jina parta :D
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ncie one! :)
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nakhan:
Achi hay, kiya tum nay khudh likhi hay?
Sukriya aap nay bata diya warna hamian bhi tanha hi jina parta
kitnay mean ho ap
instead of u saying that nahi Allah na karay kay hum juda ho jayay u are saying that
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MuteStorm:
ncie one!
thanks sweetheart
nakhan
October 27, 2005, 6:30pm
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“PRINCE CHARMING”
tumhain bhulana awal to dastaras main hi nahi
agar dastaras main hota bhi to kiya bhula daytay?
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Attia:
thanks sweetheart
My Pleasure Ma’am
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wow i love this poem :love:
was it for me
Attia ka sharam say bura haal hoing ook wateva
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MuteStorm:
My Pleasure Ma’am
Pleasure is mine
saroo
October 28, 2005, 8:07am
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agar dastaras main hota bhi to kiya bhula daytay
Zaati sharon say GS main hum sub ko sazaa detay
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^ i didnt get ur second part of the poem :(
nakhan
October 29, 2005, 4:57am
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Ya its only for u
also one of my fav
Attia time ki shortage thi warna tumhari nazar poori ghazal hi kar daita
nakhan
October 29, 2005, 5:00am
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Kaashhhhhhhh… k ye mera zaati sher hota
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nice one attia liken es mey bhe tanhai he hey kun hey ya itni tanhai
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woh kehtay hay na.. “iqrar bee kar lee to jaldi may ta woh”
btw thanks for it..
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dayko jee.. think over it …
when u are sleeping “u are tanha”
when u are thinking “u are tanha”
when u are studing “u are tanha”
when u are happy " u are tanha"
so tanhai is part of our life. we shouldnt forget about it.. and for me .. tanhai is a very big friend of mine
nakhan
October 30, 2005, 6:34am
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^^ aur bhi bohot sari jaghain hain jahan din main aik time to kam az kam “Tanha” hi jana hota hay…
agar Tanha na ho to bari mushkil ho jay…
nakhan
October 30, 2005, 6:35am
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u r most welcome
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Attia … Ye sab kuch Na karna apnay bas maiN naheeN hota
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when u r sleeping u r with ur prince charming in dreams so u r not tanha
when u r thinking u r thinking abt ur Prince charming then u r not tanha
when u r studying u have books to read then u r not tanha
and after all when u r happy ur happiness is with u then u r not tanha ok
but if you have some TALKH YAADAIN .. … then u r tanha coz u dont want to share it with some one there u r Tanha…