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**Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay’e
Hum chehra choopana bhool gay’e or palkeN jHukana bhool gay’e
Jub kashtee dur bHaNwar meN pHaNsee to logoN say hum kia kahtay
Hum aas lagana bhool gay’e or kashtee bachana bhool gay’e
Jub pahlee nazar meN dekha usay to dil ka baasee jana usay
Phir apnee wafa ko yead kia or apnee ana ko bhool gay’e
Ub hum tum say kia kuch or kahaiN
Hum to kHud ko haar chalay or apnay aap ko bhool gay’e**
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nice :)
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^ thnks…
Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay’e
Again a very nice selection Reet, lekin last sheir kuch adhoora nahin lagtaa?
Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay’e
beautiful ghazal.
thanks for sharin :~)
lekin last shair waQai mein adhoora lag raha hai 
Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e
Bahut hi achi ghazal hai... lekin like others already said... last shair adhoora waqayi kuch adhoora sa lag raha hai :-)
Dania
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nice one
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nice one !
Koyal
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nice one!
Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e
iss kadar hafza kamzoor hay hamara
hum misra pora krna bhoool gaye
:P
Aryaan
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Bohat khoob Reet …
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** GUl, HH, KN, Dania, Show_Sha, Koyal, Coolpeepa & Aryaan**
thnx everyone for liking it…
mujhe bhi yeh adhoori si lagi…par shayar ne isey poori hi likha hai…
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nice one.....
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/\ thnx....
Re: Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay’e
Very Nice… First three Ashaar very good… Tnx for Sharing REET 
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^thnx
system
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very nice :k: 
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/ hnx
khilat
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very nice 
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^thnx