Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay'e

reet · May 11, 2005, 9:54am

**Jub aaNkH say aaNsoo beh niklay hum baat banana bhool gay’e
Hum chehra choopana bhool gay’e or palkeN jHukana bhool gay’e

Jub kashtee dur bHaNwar meN pHaNsee to logoN say hum kia kahtay
Hum aas lagana bhool gay’e or kashtee bachana bhool gay’e

Jub pahlee nazar meN dekha usay to dil ka baasee jana usay
Phir apnee wafa ko yead kia or apnee ana ko bhool gay’e

Ub hum tum say kia kuch or kahaiN
Hum to kHud ko haar chalay or apnay aap ko bhool gay’e**

Shab-e-Hijar · May 12, 2005, 12:45am

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nice :)

reet · May 12, 2005, 4:37am

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^ thnks…

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · May 12, 2005, 10:26am

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Again a very nice selection Reet, lekin last sheir kuch adhoora nahin lagtaa?

HeArT_HaCKeR · May 12, 2005, 11:02am

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beautiful ghazal.
thanks for sharin :~)
lekin last shair waQai mein adhoora lag raha hai

system · May 13, 2005, 1:53pm

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Bahut hi achi ghazal hai... lekin like others already said... last shair adhoora waqayi kuch adhoora sa lag raha hai :-)

Dania · May 13, 2005, 7:29pm

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nice one

show_sha · May 13, 2005, 8:31pm

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nice one !

Koyal · May 14, 2005, 3:30am

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nice one!

coolpeepa · May 14, 2005, 6:22pm

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iss kadar hafza kamzoor hay hamara

hum misra pora krna bhoool gaye

:P

Aryaan · May 14, 2005, 8:50pm

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Bohat khoob Reet …

reet · May 15, 2005, 10:27am

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** GUl, HH, KN, Dania, Show_Sha, Koyal, Coolpeepa & Aryaan**

thnx everyone for liking it…

mujhe bhi yeh adhoori si lagi…par shayar ne isey poori hi likha hai…

_Miss_Meh · May 15, 2005, 8:00pm

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nice one.....

reet · May 17, 2005, 8:40am

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/\ thnx....

Golden_Scorpion_1 · May 24, 2005, 5:01am

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Very Nice… First three Ashaar very good… Tnx for Sharing REET

reet · June 23, 2005, 12:25pm

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^thnx

system · June 23, 2005, 1:40pm

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very nice :k:

reet · July 31, 2005, 12:31pm

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/ hnx

khilat · August 7, 2005, 3:10pm

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very nice

reet · August 21, 2005, 9:18am

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^thnx