Jo Nazar Sey Door Nikal Gaya Usey Yaad Karta Hai Her Koi..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity March 1, 2010, 6:21pm 1

Aik Ghazal,

Sar-e-Taaq-e-Jaan Na Charagh Hai Pas-e-Baam-e-Shab Na Sehar Koi
Ajab Eik Arsa-e-Daraz Hai Na Gumaan Hai Na Khabar Koi

Nahi Ab To Koi Malal Bhi, Kisi Wapsi Ka Khayaal Bhi
Gham-e-Be-Kassi Ne Mitta Diya Meray Dil Mein Tha Bhi Agar Koi

Tujhey Kya Khabar Ke Raat Bhar Tujhey Dekh Paney Ko Eik Nazar
Raha Sath Chaand Key Muntazir Teri Khirkiyoun Sey Ud’her Koi

Sar-e-Shakh-e-Jaa’n Teray Naam Ka Ajab Aik Taza Gulaab Tha
Jisey Aandhiyoun Sey Khatar Na Tha Jisey Tha Khizaan Ka Na Dar Koi

Teri Be-Rukhii Key Diyaar Mein Ghanii Teergii Key Hisaar Mein
Jalay Kis Tarah Se Charagh-e-Jaan Karay Kis Traf Ko Safar Koi

Katay Waqt Chahey Azaab Mein Kisi Khwaab Mein Ya Saraab Mein
Jo Nazar Sey Door Nikal Gaya Usey Yaad Karta Hai Her Koi

Sar-e-Bazm Jitney Charagh They Wo Tamam Ramz Shanaas They
Teri Chashm-e-Khush Key Lehaaz Sey Nahi Bolta Tha Magar Koi

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saqijani March 1, 2010, 6:28pm 2

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aww.......zabardast...

Aryaan March 1, 2010, 11:31pm 3

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Bohat Khoob Ahmer..:k:

Daanie March 2, 2010, 4:32am 4

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buhut khoob :)

redidentity March 3, 2010, 7:13pm 5

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thanks alot jee :)

being_lonely March 4, 2010, 8:00am 6

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Umda ghazal Ahmer :k:

sara_javed March 4, 2010, 2:16pm 7

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waoooo zabardast..........
ap ki apni he?

Koyal March 4, 2010, 4:18pm 8

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v nice 1 redo :)

redidentity March 9, 2010, 2:15pm 9

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thank you so much.. :)

@ Sara.. nahi jee meri itni auqaat nahi k aisa likh sakoon :(

P_G March 9, 2010, 3:04pm 10

zabrdast bohat hee umda

redidentity March 13, 2010, 6:54pm 11

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thanks PG

Sheal March 13, 2010, 7:37pm 12

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very nice Redi :k:

Sabeera March 13, 2010, 8:10pm 13

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Katay Waqt Chahey Azaab Mein Kisi Khwaab Mein Ya Saraab Mein
Jo Nazar Sey Door Nikal Gaya Usey Yaad Karta Hai Her Koi

really heart touching

Dania March 13, 2010, 11:01pm 14

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the_reader March 19, 2010, 11:16am 15

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Sar-e-Bazm Jitney Charagh They Wo Tamam Ramz Shanaas They
Teri Chashm-e-Khush Key Lehaaz Sey Nahi Bolta Tha Magar Koi

very nice